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The Blackhawks - Story, created by MuscleBob1 (some parts of the story are made up)
Chapter 1 - Mickey Mouse
Boom! Bam! Zap! 'Twas a stormy night on the island of Old Club Penguin. A mouse with amazingly huge ears stepped out of a crash landed clubhouse. Damen looked out the window of his virtual palace and saw a weird, ugly face on the human-sized mouse. "Hah," Damen laughed. "You in one army," he continued. Mickey got so mad that he drank his emergency growing potion. He turned huge. His eyes turned red, with an evil look in them. "I AM HERE TO TAKE OVER YOUR ISLAND OF PUNY, OLD PENGUINS!" Mickey shouted. "Once I complete that, I will kidnap your staff and execute them in Polo Field's slammer!" he continued. "What the heck is going on?" Cyberwolf asked, walking into Damen's palace. "The war," he said, "had just begun."
Chapter 2 - The Staff of OldCP
"Chelsey, Raindrop, Terry91, May23, Archie, Moshi, Thisismyname, Junior, PenguinDSC, CPManiac, Key123, Ellie, Minty, Emily, Mike96, and MuscleBob1 shall be captured, become my slaves, and sent to the slammer. I have a surprise for you two owners of this," he said. "You two will be tied up on the train track. I will ride my ugly train and run over you both!" he shouted. "I am recruiting some helpers right now, by the way."
Chapter 3 - Bane, the New Agent of Disney
There was a poor, hated penguin living alone on the snowy streets of Old Club Penguin. Mickey was wandering around the old island, looking for his first helper. He saw Bane. "Why, hello," Mickey said to Bane. "You seem mad. Would you like to join my agency of pure evil?" Mickey asked. "Let me think...NO," Bane replied. "I'll give you one million dollars after this," Mickey told him. "I promise to give them to you," He continued. Bane thought for a second. "I am very poor...okay then. I will join ya. But you must not lie. After we complete the mission, gimme the money or you're dead..." he said.
Chapter 4 - Attack of Morgoth
Morgoth had attacked Old Club Penguin. Morgoth is Mickey and Bane's leader. Mickey had failed. This is why Morgoth attacked. Soon, there was a battle in the void. Morgoth exploded and was never heard from again.
Chapter 5 - The Murder of Gwin
"There has been a murder at the mine," Damen announced. "An innocent penguin named Gwin had died. The only evidence so far is Gwin's rare, red Viking helmet and a broken pillar. We must find out who killed him. This is the beginning of crimezone."
Chapter 6 - Nicholas Angel and the Detectives
The leader of detectives, Nicholas Angel, had appeared on the island. He hired some detectives: Pieguy, Tennis, MuscleBob1, Mike676, and others. A few weeks later, a notebook owned by a penguin named Derrick was found in the Book Room. MuscleBob1 had discovered Derrick was the murderer of Gwin.
Chapter 7 - Derrick, Rover, and Clarkson
Soon, Derrick disappeared. A new Blackhawk named Rover had come to the island. He soon turned nice, so he was killed by the other Blackhawks. The Blackhawks left a message, "ROVER LIED SO HE DIED!" Clarkson became the new leader of the Blackhawks. He was soon shot and killed.
Chapter 8 - The Last Blackhawks
Scarlet and Draken were the last Blackhawks of their kind. Scarlet is actually Rover. Soon, the four stage inspectors shot Scarlet and banned Draken. This was the last of the Blackhawks.
Chapter 9 - Coffee Shop Explosion
Bane has changed. He is now on the good side. Soon, the Coffee Shop exploded because Cyberwolf used a bad toilet. Some say there might have been a bomb in the toilet. People could hear Mickey in the background of the Coffee Shop saying "See you real soon!"
Chapter 10 - Goodbye Evil
The Blackhawks and Disneys have all been destroyed. Some say there could still be some Blackhawks wandering around the island of Old Club Penguin...we will never know the truth until something bad happens.
Chapter 1 - Mickey Mouse
Boom! Bam! Zap! 'Twas a stormy night on the island of Old Club Penguin. A mouse with amazingly huge ears stepped out of a crash landed clubhouse. Damen looked out the window of his virtual palace and saw a weird, ugly face on the human-sized mouse. "Hah," Damen laughed. "You in one army," he continued. Mickey got so mad that he drank his emergency growing potion. He turned huge. His eyes turned red, with an evil look in them. "I AM HERE TO TAKE OVER YOUR ISLAND OF PUNY, OLD PENGUINS!" Mickey shouted. "Once I complete that, I will kidnap your staff and execute them in Polo Field's slammer!" he continued. "What the heck is going on?" Cyberwolf asked, walking into Damen's palace. "The war," he said, "had just begun."
Chapter 2 - The Staff of OldCP
"Chelsey, Raindrop, Terry91, May23, Archie, Moshi, Thisismyname, Junior, PenguinDSC, CPManiac, Key123, Ellie, Minty, Emily, Mike96, and MuscleBob1 shall be captured, become my slaves, and sent to the slammer. I have a surprise for you two owners of this," he said. "You two will be tied up on the train track. I will ride my ugly train and run over you both!" he shouted. "I am recruiting some helpers right now, by the way."
Chapter 3 - Bane, the New Agent of Disney
There was a poor, hated penguin living alone on the snowy streets of Old Club Penguin. Mickey was wandering around the old island, looking for his first helper. He saw Bane. "Why, hello," Mickey said to Bane. "You seem mad. Would you like to join my agency of pure evil?" Mickey asked. "Let me think...NO," Bane replied. "I'll give you one million dollars after this," Mickey told him. "I promise to give them to you," He continued. Bane thought for a second. "I am very poor...okay then. I will join ya. But you must not lie. After we complete the mission, gimme the money or you're dead..." he said.
Chapter 4 - Attack of Morgoth
Morgoth had attacked Old Club Penguin. Morgoth is Mickey and Bane's leader. Mickey had failed. This is why Morgoth attacked. Soon, there was a battle in the void. Morgoth exploded and was never heard from again.
Chapter 5 - The Murder of Gwin
"There has been a murder at the mine," Damen announced. "An innocent penguin named Gwin had died. The only evidence so far is Gwin's rare, red Viking helmet and a broken pillar. We must find out who killed him. This is the beginning of crimezone."
Chapter 6 - Nicholas Angel and the Detectives
The leader of detectives, Nicholas Angel, had appeared on the island. He hired some detectives: Pieguy, Tennis, MuscleBob1, Mike676, and others. A few weeks later, a notebook owned by a penguin named Derrick was found in the Book Room. MuscleBob1 had discovered Derrick was the murderer of Gwin.
Chapter 7 - Derrick, Rover, and Clarkson
Soon, Derrick disappeared. A new Blackhawk named Rover had come to the island. He soon turned nice, so he was killed by the other Blackhawks. The Blackhawks left a message, "ROVER LIED SO HE DIED!" Clarkson became the new leader of the Blackhawks. He was soon shot and killed.
Chapter 8 - The Last Blackhawks
Scarlet and Draken were the last Blackhawks of their kind. Scarlet is actually Rover. Soon, the four stage inspectors shot Scarlet and banned Draken. This was the last of the Blackhawks.
Chapter 9 - Coffee Shop Explosion
Bane has changed. He is now on the good side. Soon, the Coffee Shop exploded because Cyberwolf used a bad toilet. Some say there might have been a bomb in the toilet. People could hear Mickey in the background of the Coffee Shop saying "See you real soon!"
Chapter 10 - Goodbye Evil
The Blackhawks and Disneys have all been destroyed. Some say there could still be some Blackhawks wandering around the island of Old Club Penguin...we will never know the truth until something bad happens.
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24th February 2014, 07:17 PM
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Don't say that R word. In that sentence: "Damen looked out the window of his virtual palace and saw a r****** face on the human-sized mouse." That R word is not a nice word. Kids shouldn't be seeing it.
Topic: Good story.
Topic: Good story.
Sorry about that, I agree with you. I will change it.
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24th February 2014, 07:25 PM
WAIT SO MICKEY IS BACK DUN DUN DUNNNNNNN
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24th February 2014, 07:48 PM
I was also a detective, but I was later fired.
