Improved Application

Hello, there! My name is Toby. I would like to be a Detective because...

Hobby
Solving crimes and mysteries is one of my hobbies. I like to play games based on murders, and you have to find clues to know who did the crime.

Experience
I was once a Detective before, and I have recently earned my trust back from Damen. I used to check status reports, and arrange meetings with the Blackhawks. I would normally find code, and figure it out using the Pigpen Cipher code.

Why

Like I said, my hobby is solving crimes, and I am into mystery games. I am good with clues, as I have watched too many of these detective shows and cases.

Interests

Why I am interested in being a detective...

1. Crimes - I love solving crimes and mysteries because I like the way it all fits together.
2. Characters - I like meeting the new villains and new characters, and being a Detective enables me to do this easier.
3. Wiseman - I like to be wise, and I look wise when I'm recognised as a Detective

two many applications are bad, but good job.

Wow! I have the same exact hobbies as you and I like the same things!! Being a detective is so fun because you have to gather clues and everything, it is like a puzzle in a way! Also, it is awesome because you meet new characters and then those characters lead to something huge! Which leads to another thing that is huge, and so on, I love your application!

I only made two applications, and this one has new things.

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two many applications are bad, but good job.

? What do you mean too many applications are bad?

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two many applications are bad, but good job.

? What do you mean too many applications are bad?

If you post 1000 applications for the same thing you will not get the job.

Nice job! This application is pretty neat, good luck! ~Luke

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two many applications are bad, but good job.

? What do you mean too many applications are bad?

If you post 1000 applications for the same thing you will not get the job.

Good thing I only posted 999 applications!

Good luck Toby!