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The One, By, Sadie

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9th April 2014, 11:07 PM

Hello,

As many of you know I have not made a story in quite sometime, so I decided why not think of something mysterious so I of course sat down and got a pen and paper and started writing and writing and I finally finished the first section. Now, I hope you enjoy it if you did not enjoy it well tell me something I could improve about it! Do you want to be added into the story? Well details will be listed down below I hope you enjoy!

Chapter One: The Odd One

~ I was always called odd, I was always the one whom ate with a spoon even though I was supposed to eat with a simple fork. I'd be the girl who burped in front of everyone, I didn't care if I was judged because I knew my powers would someday over throw the cruel souls whom broke me inside and out. I always wanted to let things go, I even wanted to let my life go I never wanted to live but I had a choice to make an I had to make the right one either way nothing would be the same again. I held such a special power deep down inside I could no longer control it I would weaken daily I would fall to my knees praying for happiness but every-time happiness found its way into my soul I would let go of myself I would sob and sorrow under the willow tree. Why was I so odd when I only wanted to be unique I always asked myself "why am I not perfect, what am I, why am I such a monster?" I sat for days under the willow tree I felt somewhat free when I sat under this old willow tree I could be myself and my powers could be set free. But everything changed when the old willow was cut down... the one who cut the tree down was my own father he called me stupid just because I cried everyday he called me weak and frail he said for me to move on and get a life I later on wrote down the five people who I would get my revenge on I planned nightly of who would be revenged the first one would be my own...



No, I'm not going to let you know until tomorrow :) that is the way I work I like making people feel lost (somewhat) but I want them to feel as if they must read more! I hope you enjoyed the beginning I kind of came up with this when I was thinking of a few things so I hope you all enjoy reading it. Now to get into details of being in the story.

-The Main Characters name soon will be known as Willow.

Now, if you want to be added into the story list the reason why down below and the name you want in the story (every chapter will list the characters and who plays them) so just comment something down below if ya want to be added in all characters will be listed down below.

Characters:
-Willow=Me
-Kimberly= iKaitlyn
-Jackson= Slim Shady
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(Ask down below to be added you may keep the name of your forum account)

Thanks I hope you enjoyed it!

Love,Sadie :)
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9th April 2014, 11:21 PM

I loved the story and I would like to be Kimberly. +1 real nice stories I hope to see them more often in the forums.
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Sadie,
this is nothing less than beautiful, awesome work I love it. :)))) ~I LOVE that.... :) ~Made by me! And my Sister.Tiki, it is AWESOME!!!!

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9th April 2014, 11:25 PM

If you look under the 'arts' category you will son enough find some of my past works of art. I also have some stories on other category's if I can i'll post the links to some of my older stories :) an you'll be added.
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10th April 2014, 12:21 AM

Can i be added as a person in the story? i want to be a boy named jackson who is blind and gets bullied. Idk I just would love to be ing your story it's so good! If i could i would give it 100,000,000 likes but i can only give you one sadly 1+
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10th April 2014, 01:24 AM

Brilliant post! I already know I will be added so I will not ask for an add on +1 from me Sadie.
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10th April 2014, 02:40 AM

Emotional start to the story
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10th April 2014, 04:11 AM

Can I be the character David Tennant

Then saying David Tennant = Luke

Thanks :D -Luke
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10th April 2014, 04:37 AM

Thats a pretty good story you have there it has a good start to it too! +1
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10th April 2014, 06:05 AM

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Brilliant post! I already know I will be added so I will not ask for an add on +1 from me Sadie.

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OT; Nice story Sadie!
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10th April 2014, 07:01 AM

Wow! Brilliant story.I will try my best to read them in the future.
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10th April 2014, 11:56 AM

cool story, I don't know what I would be if I was in it, but I like it good job.:)
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10th April 2014, 12:16 PM

Cool story! May I join if I could. I want to join because it would be neat to see what I would be like in a story by Sadie! I don't really know a name though, I am bad with names... How about... I am so not looking up names on Google right now. Ah, here we go! A survey for popular names say Noah! I mean, I totally thought of that myself! I'll be Noah.
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10th April 2014, 12:49 PM

maybe I could be in it umm my name would be ummm I don't know how about umm Rose. ya I guess.:)


P.S. good story.
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10th April 2014, 03:39 PM

Could I be the character Stella? Like the new girl who has a abilty to see the future but Willows Best friend ~Star~
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11th April 2014, 08:05 AM

I could be a character
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