14th April 2014
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Penguin watch

Made by bashysmelly in Applications

The Guy From Boston
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14th April 2014, 11:35 AM

Hello damen I would like to apply for Penguin Watch

Name:Bashysmelly

Expirence: Dont have that much expirence sorry :(

Reason: I find it like maybe its time for me to take a step further and like start a new chapter. Kinda werid


Well thats all i have sorry i couldent write much expirience about pw. I Think im not getting that Penguin Watch role.

Well write what u want
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14th April 2014, 11:40 AM

I think you should put more detail, change your name and try to be in oldcp a bit longer so Damen knows you're trustworthy.
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14th April 2014, 11:51 AM

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I think you should put more detail, change your name and try to be in oldcp a bit longer so Damen knows you're trustworthy.
Yes. Your application is great but I agree with OldSpeed
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14th April 2014, 12:12 PM

Quote:
I think you should put more detail, change your name and try to be in oldcp a bit longer so Damen knows you're trustworthy.

Agreed
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The King Dog
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14th April 2014, 02:53 PM

I think you could add things about how you know how penguin watch works and things like that.
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The King Dog

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14th April 2014, 02:55 PM

Then if you did what I just said it you would the post would probably a little better i'm not saying that it is bad it just needs some more details thats just my opinion. :) :D



Hoped I helped a little bit. :)
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The King Dog

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14th April 2014, 06:47 PM

You should add more on why you should be selected as PW. Add details about how you would protect the citizens of OldCP, and why you want to protect OldCP. Great structure though, it just needs more support and detail.
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