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The One, By, Sadie #2

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Hello Guys,

Here is the second part of my story 'The One' this was created by me as I stayed up nightly thinking of a new story this second part will become juicy and much will be added into this. Remember look out for main key points and as always I hope you enjoy this story as I enjoyed writing this. Sit back relax and enjoy.

The One

~Priviest Post/Story: http://forums.damenspike.com/view/?id=13185

Chapter #2

~ The first one would be my own father, he'd always pick on me for being different, he'd always call me names and throw my stuff down just so I could do some "work" he was quite the drinker and he would often drink the night away, some nights I thought he would kill me. I have been thinking of my revenge on him such as "should I use my powers, should I call the police etc" I didn't know what I would do if all ended badly I knew my powers where growing stronger and I was getting weaker soon enough I couldn't go to school no longer... days passed and the day finally came the day they took every piece of the old willow there will no longer be twigs of it or branches the entire willow tree would be gone, I thought about this day in my head for quite sometime and I knew for a fact without it i'd be pushed to do laundry or even have to slave over my father. I wondered what I'd do without that tree perhaps I'd move on perhaps not all I knew is that one day revenge will come to those who called me dumb or stupid, revenge would come to those who bullied others over something so ridiculous. My only friend at this time was Kimberly (Kaitlyn) she would come to my house but with caution because my father would throw empty bottles at her face causing so many scars she soon enough hated him as well and she wanted to plot something so devious so horrible and so...

Yup, I stopped the story right there :3 I wanted you to think of an ending! Give me ideas and remember those who commented on my past story/post will be ended along the way. I hope you enjoyed reading it :) I worked pretty hard on making a deep,cold,interesting story, tell me if you believe I succeeded on it. Remember comment down below details and ideas an if you want to be added to the story along the way (pick a name and what is your purpose) thanks!



~Love,Sadie~
(Note: every typo and mistake will be edited)
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14th May 2014, 06:15 PM

That was beautiful, it was interesting, amazing, cold, you truly did succeed in this story, and at that you succeeded greatfully. Poor girl, I would hate her father too, XD, I am just like Kimberly and it is so sweet that I am your only friend (for now), it truly means a lot to me that you added me to your story. :) +1

~iKaitlyn~ ~(^-^)~
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Sadie,
this is nothing less than beautiful, awesome work I love it. :)))) ~I LOVE that.... :) ~Made by me! And my Sister.Tiki, it is AWESOME!!!!

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14th May 2014, 06:22 PM

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That was beautiful, it was interesting, amazing, cold, you truly did succeed in this story, and at that you succeeded greatfully. Poor girl, I would hate her father too, XD, I am just like Kimberly and it is so sweet that I am your only friend (for now), it truly means a lot to me that you added me to your story. :) +1



~iKaitlyn~ ~(^-^)~

Ha! Thank you :) I am glad you enjoyed the story and i'm glad to enjoy being part of the story plus you where the first that came to mind. ;)
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14th May 2014, 06:24 PM

I hate the girl's father...
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14th May 2014, 06:31 PM

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That was beautiful, it was interesting, amazing, cold, you truly did succeed in this story, and at that you succeeded greatfully. Poor girl, I would hate her father too, XD, I am just like Kimberly and it is so sweet that I am your only friend (for now), it truly means a lot to me that you added me to your story. :) +1







~iKaitlyn~ ~(^-^)~



Ha! Thank you :) I am glad you enjoyed the story and i'm glad to enjoy being part of the story plus you where the first that came to mind. ;)


Awww...... That warms my heart to see that I was the first person to come to your mind, I truly do enjoy being your friend!!!! Oh and no problem on the kind Words, I truly did mean them, I did love your story and I am anxious for more....

~iKaitlyn~ ~(^-^)~
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Sadie,
this is nothing less than beautiful, awesome work I love it. :)))) ~I LOVE that.... :) ~Made by me! And my Sister.Tiki, it is AWESOME!!!!

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14th May 2014, 06:37 PM

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I hate the girl's father...
Ikr lol
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14th May 2014, 06:39 PM

Well the girl's father is a big jerk. Love the story BTW! +1
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14th May 2014, 06:42 PM

I LOVE IT!!!! I feel like I may appear soon I will just state my chracter one more time so you can remember it. Stella the girl who can see the future and Willow's bff.


Back to topic: I love it! It is so well written and emotional at the same time. I hope this can become a real movie or a book cause I would read it once I get my hand on it. +1
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14th May 2014, 06:50 PM

Perhaps once it is done I could maybe make a "movie" perhaps in-game or in RL and post it on here :) whichever is easier for me of course, and many things are coming to you guys like many PLOT TWISTS be ready to see a major plot twist ;)
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Perhaps once it is done I could maybe make a "movie" perhaps in-game or in RL and post it on here :) whichever is easier for me of course, and many things are coming to you guys like many PLOT TWISTS be ready to see a major plot twist ;)
I am freaking out now I want to see the next part now!! +1 for making me freak out XD ~Starwolf~
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14th May 2014, 07:22 PM

This is AMAZING! I loveeee the story! I just want to keep reading lol. Excellent work, This story is awesome, and insteresting


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This is AMAZING! I loveeee the story! I just want to keep reading lol. Excellent work, This story is awesome, and insteresting





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Thank you very much Tacoooo I am glad you enjoyed it!
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14th May 2014, 09:00 PM

Great story. I really enjoyed it. I can relate to it in a way because I get picked on at school sometimes. +1.. :3
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