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Hello Everyone,
Here is the third part of The One I hope you enjoy this part as much as you enjoyed my former chapters of this story I've been working on here and there, yet never forgetting to make it. In this one you'll see a climax and it will rise in action and drama will break loose. I hope you enjoy reading this chapter as I enjoyed writing this chapter. Enjoy.
The One
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Chapter #3
~ And so gruesome, this plan would be mostly a plan to get rid of my father and make him feel the pain I felt for most of my life. Depression was my main problem so I invited my very few friends I had to plan this devious plan. Me,Kimberly, and Stella sat in a old shed in my backyard thinking of payback and most of all how to end my fathers evil ways once and for all. Kimberly suggested to run away but I didn't enjoy that idea so Stella said "I can see the future, the future is bright but so hidden, I can't make out the entire story." I was confused... I thought "why couldn't she figure out the end, why couldn't she see all of my future." we sat waiting for that one moment when all of us girls would say "yes, I got it" but sadly it never came it seemed all of us where lost and I felt as if the energy in the room grew apart it seemed everyone didn't have the same idea. Soon enough Kimberly left the room and went off in the woods, then Stella left saying "your future is unknown" there I sat alone finally getting up and going back into my house. My father sat on the couch almost lifeless I stared down at him and gave such a dirty look, my eyes looked into his eyes and for a single moment I saw a vision I didn't understand this vision but this vision I saw was... my own... mother...
Yeah that's the perfect place to end this part of the story, it leaves you on a string swaying with confusion wondering why she saw her own mother who passed. Tell me your thoughts down below and if you enjoyed this story give it a +1. Remember you can be added at any time just comment below a name and what your role will be. Thanks for reading

(Note: she saw here mother who passed not her father, sorry miner mistake)
~Love,Sadie~
Here is the third part of The One I hope you enjoy this part as much as you enjoyed my former chapters of this story I've been working on here and there, yet never forgetting to make it. In this one you'll see a climax and it will rise in action and drama will break loose. I hope you enjoy reading this chapter as I enjoyed writing this chapter. Enjoy.
The One
~Priviest Post/Story: http://forums.damenspike.com/view/?id=13185
Chapter #3
~ And so gruesome, this plan would be mostly a plan to get rid of my father and make him feel the pain I felt for most of my life. Depression was my main problem so I invited my very few friends I had to plan this devious plan. Me,Kimberly, and Stella sat in a old shed in my backyard thinking of payback and most of all how to end my fathers evil ways once and for all. Kimberly suggested to run away but I didn't enjoy that idea so Stella said "I can see the future, the future is bright but so hidden, I can't make out the entire story." I was confused... I thought "why couldn't she figure out the end, why couldn't she see all of my future." we sat waiting for that one moment when all of us girls would say "yes, I got it" but sadly it never came it seemed all of us where lost and I felt as if the energy in the room grew apart it seemed everyone didn't have the same idea. Soon enough Kimberly left the room and went off in the woods, then Stella left saying "your future is unknown" there I sat alone finally getting up and going back into my house. My father sat on the couch almost lifeless I stared down at him and gave such a dirty look, my eyes looked into his eyes and for a single moment I saw a vision I didn't understand this vision but this vision I saw was... my own... mother...
Yeah that's the perfect place to end this part of the story, it leaves you on a string swaying with confusion wondering why she saw her own mother who passed. Tell me your thoughts down below and if you enjoyed this story give it a +1. Remember you can be added at any time just comment below a name and what your role will be. Thanks for reading


(Note: she saw here mother who passed not her father, sorry miner mistake)
~Love,Sadie~
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2nd June 2014, 04:21 PM
This is AWESOME!!!! You must be an author lol, I want to know what happens nexttt lol.Good work, Sadieeee! Cant wait until #4!! You put so much great detail, and make it so interesting! This honestly could be an actual book, at a library. You have talent, Sadie. Im sure everyone is loving this story so far, It has great vocabulary also, by the way. This is better then all the books I've ever read, and is SOOO great! I am 100% sure everyone loves this, since it is really amazing and I love ittt. I wonder what is gonna happen next... Good job!!! I am so glad you are making these, since they are really fabulous, and I cant wait to read the new ones you make!! +1!
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This is AWESOME!!!! You must be an author lol, I want to know what happens nexttt lol.Good work, Sadieeee! Cant wait until #4!! You put so much great detail, and make it so interesting! This honestly could be an actual book, at a library. You have talent, Sadie. Im sure everyone is loving this story so far, It has great vocabulary also, by the way. This is better then all the books I've ever read, and is SOOO great! I am 100% sure everyone loves this, since it is really amazing and I love ittt. I wonder what is gonna happen next... Good job!!! I am so glad you are making these, since they are really fabulous, and I cant wait to read the new ones you make!! +1!
-Tacofun~
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Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you! I am super happy you're loving my stories it makes me fee great inside

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