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2nd June 2014, 06:39 PM
Hello Humans,
Here is the forth part of The One once again I hope you enjoy this part of my story and you'll have many questions be answered during this such as why she saw her own mother. Some characters will be returning during this part of the story, remember you can always comment below to be added into the story just write a name and what you'll be doing in the story. Thanks for being patient throughout this story I know I rarely post chapters... but that's because I comment on so many posts I kinda find it turn to night before I even know it! So sit back and relax and enjoy reading, this chapter will be relatively long but don't threat you'll wanna keep reading it.
The One
~Priviest Post/Story: http://forums.damenspike.com/view/16558The One, By, Sadie #3/
(Note: The link is very very big please copy and paste)
Chapter #4
~ I continued up the stairs... but before I reached the top I hurt the quiet faint of my father getting up from his chair (his rocking chair) and slowly walking up the stairs I stood at the top for awhile wondering "he never got up from his chair, what is up with him" so I moved to my room nervous yet stable... I sank into my big chair and sat there listening outside my door wondering what he was doing. I heard a quiet whisper outside my door saying... "Willow come on out here... it's time we have a talk" I pretended to sleep, heck I was scared he never asked for me he knew I didn't enjoy speaking with him yet he continued. I was shocked when he finally left kicking my door causing a tiny peace yellow paint to chip away. I knew he was 'under the weather' so I got up and gazed outside at the night sky which was slightly red with a tint of purple. The moon was full the noises of crickets sounded the night sky so beautifully. I went to my bed and curled into a ball this often made me feel secure and warm. I slowly shut my eyes and fell to sleep... when about an hour later I heard "Willow, it's me your mother... please don't be afraid" I woke up almost in one second I looked up I knew it was her voice I knew it was her I gazed around my room thinking I was going crazy, I said "Mom... is that... you?" she replied "Yes hun, it's me don't worry" I replied back saying "come out I need to know you're real" she said if you believe i'm real there's no meaning for me to come out, you must believe i'm here and I shall believe you're believing in me" I said "I believe... I truly believe" not letting anyone know a single tear fell from my face. All of a sudden my room lit up such a color I didn't know was real it was bright and beautiful I saw my mothers face it was stunning I looked just like her... she came closer and I said "I love you mom" she said "I know" and then BAM the room turned normal and it was all gone I heard my father walking up the steps... but I heard the sudden sound of a gun barrel being cleaned, I gulped and headed for the...
I'm going to stop right there it seems like the perfect place to stop. Tell me your thoughts! Did you enjoy this part, should it be changed... what do you wanna see in chapter 5? I truly hope this was interesting I enjoyed writing this and letting my thoughts pour out and do the typing, thanks for reading

~Love,Sadie~
Here is the forth part of The One once again I hope you enjoy this part of my story and you'll have many questions be answered during this such as why she saw her own mother. Some characters will be returning during this part of the story, remember you can always comment below to be added into the story just write a name and what you'll be doing in the story. Thanks for being patient throughout this story I know I rarely post chapters... but that's because I comment on so many posts I kinda find it turn to night before I even know it! So sit back and relax and enjoy reading, this chapter will be relatively long but don't threat you'll wanna keep reading it.
The One
~Priviest Post/Story: http://forums.damenspike.com/view/16558The One, By, Sadie #3/
(Note: The link is very very big please copy and paste)
Chapter #4
~ I continued up the stairs... but before I reached the top I hurt the quiet faint of my father getting up from his chair (his rocking chair) and slowly walking up the stairs I stood at the top for awhile wondering "he never got up from his chair, what is up with him" so I moved to my room nervous yet stable... I sank into my big chair and sat there listening outside my door wondering what he was doing. I heard a quiet whisper outside my door saying... "Willow come on out here... it's time we have a talk" I pretended to sleep, heck I was scared he never asked for me he knew I didn't enjoy speaking with him yet he continued. I was shocked when he finally left kicking my door causing a tiny peace yellow paint to chip away. I knew he was 'under the weather' so I got up and gazed outside at the night sky which was slightly red with a tint of purple. The moon was full the noises of crickets sounded the night sky so beautifully. I went to my bed and curled into a ball this often made me feel secure and warm. I slowly shut my eyes and fell to sleep... when about an hour later I heard "Willow, it's me your mother... please don't be afraid" I woke up almost in one second I looked up I knew it was her voice I knew it was her I gazed around my room thinking I was going crazy, I said "Mom... is that... you?" she replied "Yes hun, it's me don't worry" I replied back saying "come out I need to know you're real" she said if you believe i'm real there's no meaning for me to come out, you must believe i'm here and I shall believe you're believing in me" I said "I believe... I truly believe" not letting anyone know a single tear fell from my face. All of a sudden my room lit up such a color I didn't know was real it was bright and beautiful I saw my mothers face it was stunning I looked just like her... she came closer and I said "I love you mom" she said "I know" and then BAM the room turned normal and it was all gone I heard my father walking up the steps... but I heard the sudden sound of a gun barrel being cleaned, I gulped and headed for the...
I'm going to stop right there it seems like the perfect place to stop. Tell me your thoughts! Did you enjoy this part, should it be changed... what do you wanna see in chapter 5? I truly hope this was interesting I enjoyed writing this and letting my thoughts pour out and do the typing, thanks for reading


~Love,Sadie~
Hi, I'm Scott.
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2nd June 2014, 07:43 PM
I love this!!! As I said in my other post on part 3, you are amazing at writing this. Good job, Sadieee, I love reading this. This one was especially amazing, and it was just great, I was so interested, and I loved what was happening, it was amazing. Good job, Sadie, your great at this
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