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Intro

Hello everyone. I am Melanie. Today I am here to apply for a detective. Please enjoy.
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Name
OoMelanieoO

Age
Too personal

Gender
I am a girl

Experience
I have a lot of experience. I like solving stuff.

Why do you want to be a detective?
Well, recently there has been a lot of drama with the Blackhawks. I would like to help catch them.

Will you abuse your powers?
No. I will never abuse my powers.

Can we trust you?
Yes you can.

If you got demoted, will you freak out?
No. I will stay calm.

Will you call the crime office in case of a crime?
Yes I will.

How long have you been on OldCP?
I have been on OldCP for about a year now.

Will you help defeat the Blackhawks?
Yes I will.

How will you use you powers?
I will use my powers by helping out on mysteries.

Have you ever gotten a job?
No I haven't. Sorry.
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Closing

Thank you so much for reading. I hope this is good enough. Bye!
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No offence but you might need a bit more info like what is your experience or will you call the crime office in-case of a crime?

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No offence but you might need a bit more info like what is your experience or will you call the crime office in-case of a crime?

I did that. *I edited it *

Why should you be trusted? How long have you been here? What would you do as a detective? Why do you want to be a detective? What is your experience? Have you ever gotten a job on DSGHQ, if so, what? If you were demoted, would you freak out? How would you use your powers?

Add these, and your application should turn out even better!

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Why should you be trusted? How long have you been here? What would you do as a detective? Why do you want to be a detective? What is your experience? Have you ever gotten a job on DSGHQ, if so, what? If you were demoted, would you freak out? How would you use your powers?



Add these, and your application should turn put even better!

Oh thanks!