Guys, you are right! I see the post of CyberWolf for new jobs, and I was looking for jobs, but I was apply for jobs that they are not AVAILABLE. So, this is my final app (I think, until other New Jobs come over)! I will be a Dance Lounge Waitress! I wanna be in the Dance Lounge because I like Music and Partys! I will serve to hungry people after a big party and I will cooking snacks for The Party.

Reason:
1) É like partys!
2) I always want to have a job like this.
3) I watch a lot of cook series so I know how to Cook and be a Waitress.
4) I wanna a job so much because I need money!
5) I like this job.
6) I was usually cook and serve delicious-taste dishes with my dad so I have experience!

Ok guys! Thats for today! I hope you like my job! Bye!

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Guys, you are right! I see the post of CyberWolf for new jobs, and I was looking for jobs, but I was apply for jobs that they are not AVAILABLE. So, this is my final app (I think, until other New Jobs come over)! I will be a Dance Lounge Waitress! I wanna be in the Dance Lounge because I like Music and Partys! I will serve to hungry people after a big party and I will cooking snacks for The Party.



Reason:

1) É like partys!

2) I always want to have a job like this.

3) I watch a lot of cook series so I know how to Cook and be a Waitress.

4) I wanna a job so much because I need money!

5) I like this job.



Ok guys! Thats for today! I hope you like my job! Bye!

What is your experience?

Also give more reasons why you want this job like, if you're going to be there on time. You should also be mature about this job, I didn't see any reason that show's you're mature. I'm only trying to help, you could look at other people techniques and see how they write there applications but, don't copy. I hope this helped.
~Angi