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Freehawk
23rd July 2014, 06:31 PM
Hello There,Today I will be Applying for the Rank Detective
Why Would I like to be a detective/why would I make a good detective?
When I heard The Rank Was Back I seriously Screamed My Head off,I was Like "OMG",This is my dream job,but on too the main point I would like too be one because Im very good at easdropping (Okay yeah sometimes I easdrop
) I can spy anytime and Anywhere,Me and My BFF spy all the time on the people in my neighborhood,Oh and I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeee,Nancy Drew,And GooseBumps!
Would I Abuse My Powers?
No.I would Not,Detective Is A Huge responsibilty,i beleive you come with Guns,Which May not be misused,I would Only Use My Power and Wisdom,When Needed,I would Never ever,Just play around with my powers
Do I have experience?
Yes.i play Spies All The Time at School,My Aunt Works In the Goverment,So she's Sorta like A spy! I am Always on Guard I sorta Have Big Ears,So Its Hard For me not to easdrop,I also Read A bunch Of mystery/adventure books So they Give me alot Of imformation
Am I Active?
Yes,You could Say im on decently,I sometimes am Not Online Because im busy,or I stuff on my mind,Other Than That Im Really Active!
INFO
name:Icia
Age:10
Experienced:Yes
Why Would I like to be a detective/why would I make a good detective?
When I heard The Rank Was Back I seriously Screamed My Head off,I was Like "OMG",This is my dream job,but on too the main point I would like too be one because Im very good at easdropping (Okay yeah sometimes I easdrop
) I can spy anytime and Anywhere,Me and My BFF spy all the time on the people in my neighborhood,Oh and I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeee,Nancy Drew,And GooseBumps!Would I Abuse My Powers?
No.I would Not,Detective Is A Huge responsibilty,i beleive you come with Guns,Which May not be misused,I would Only Use My Power and Wisdom,When Needed,I would Never ever,Just play around with my powers
Do I have experience?
Yes.i play Spies All The Time at School,My Aunt Works In the Goverment,So she's Sorta like A spy! I am Always on Guard I sorta Have Big Ears,So Its Hard For me not to easdrop,I also Read A bunch Of mystery/adventure books So they Give me alot Of imformation
Am I Active?
Yes,You could Say im on decently,I sometimes am Not Online Because im busy,or I stuff on my mind,Other Than That Im Really Active!
INFO
name:Icia
Age:10
Experienced:Yes
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23rd July 2014, 09:08 PM
This is a decent application, but I would just add more detail to each category of your post. Explain more about why you want this job, why you would make a good fit for the job, more about your experience, if you are active, and use correct punctuation and grammar. These are just some basic tips to make your application even better. I hope this helped. And I wish you the best with achieving your dream. +1
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happy halloween <3 :)
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Seen 6th February 2016
23rd July 2014, 11:33 PM
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This is a decent application, but I would just add more detail to each category of your post. Explain more about why you want this job, why you would make a good fit for the job, more about your experience, if you are active, and use correct punctuation and grammar. These are just some basic tips to make your application even better. I hope this helped. And I wish you the best with achieving your dream. +1
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