Hey guys! Today I'm going to make a Snaildom story! I have some really good ideas, hope you guys like this!

One day, there was this girl, her name was Luna. Today was her first day of high school ad a Freshman. After her mom and dad both kissed her goodbye, she went on the school bus. She walked in, and it was packed. There were people everywhere! She saw one spot in the back. Luna made her way to the seat. Two Seniors came up to her. "What do you think you are doing?" They asked in a rude voice. She answered "I just wanted to sit down.". "This is our spot! Go find another seat, freshman!". Luna got mad, but then felt a hand on her shoulder. She turned around. "Come sit with me, I have an extra seat." Said a girl about her age. They sat down together at the way back of the bus. "I'm Skylar, you must be new. You don't want to get near them, they can be pretty mean sometimes.' said Skylar. "Yeah, I am new. I'm Luna." said Luna. Skylar asked Luna if they could be friends. Luna was glad to hear that, a friend of the first day. They both smiled .
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When the bell rang for lunch, Skylar and Luna met up at the cafeteria door. They went inside. It was even more crowded than the school bus. Skylar grabed Luna's hand and lead them through. When they got their lunch, they went outside to eat. It wasn't that crowded out there. They sat down at a table with another freshman. Skylar introduced them. The other girl's name was Rose. She had really pretty red hair and glasses. Skylar and Rose had been friends ever since middle school. Luna looked over to the table next to them. There was a girl (also their age) with black hair and a beanie on. Luna, still looking at the girl, tapped Skylar's shoulder. "Who's that girl over there?". Skylar said "Oh, that's Hailey. She doesn't like to talk to anyone. Last year, I asked her if she wanted to hand out, she never replied.". Luna got up and walked over to Hailey. "Hey, my name's Luna. I'm new. I would really like it if you would come hang out with us, what do you say?" Luna said kindly. Hailey looked up. "Why me?" she said as she looked down at her food."Well," said Luna "you looked like you were nice, and I just wanted to know.". Hailey got up. Everything went silent. Skylar and Rose stood up. Everyone was staring, waiting in the suspense. Hailey picked up her tray and walked over to the table where Luna was sitting. "AWHHH " said everyone. They did not expect that. Luna smiled and sat down too. Moments later, they all became friends because of a funny joke Rose told.
The day finally ended. All the tests and teachers were over and done 'till tomorrow. Skylar waved goodbye to Luna as she left the bus. She looked behind her, and waved back. A great day, thought Luna.

I hoped you guys liked it! I know it is kind of long...and cheesey..but if I get more than 5 likes, even if this isn't approved for Snaildom, I will be making a part 2! I hoped you guys read it all! .

This is good, but it doesn't seem like the action they need for Snaildom. Still, really good! +1!

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This is good, but it doesn't seem like the action they need for Snaildom. Still, really good! +1!

I didn't know that it needed action....Thanks for the like though.

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This is good, but it doesn't seem like the action they need for Snaildom. Still, really good! +1!

I didn't know that it needed action....Thanks for the like though.

Well, its like, fighting action.

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This is good, but it doesn't seem like the action they need for Snaildom. Still, really good! +1!

I didn't know that it needed action....Thanks for the like though.

Well, its like, fighting action.

Well, the type of story is in the title. This is just a change from action and stuff. I don't really like action books, that's why.

I absolutely adored this story! It had me at the edge of my seat! Great job with the details. I loved it. And it might not have a lot of action just because it's the beginning, but I bet it will later on if you make more. All stories do not need to have action for Snaildom. There could be some very interesting stories too, just like yours. Even if it doesn't fit Snaildom, it is quite an entertaining novel. Thank you for sharing it with us! +1

Thank you all for 5 likes! I will be posting a part 2 soon

This is a really good story.Oh,By the way,Make that 7 likes .