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Snaildom story!

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20th August 2014, 11:36 AM

There was a kingdom of snails, lead by the king, Damen, and they we're happy to see that he created the kingdom for them!
It was a peaceful place,harmony, peice, and forever lasting friendship!
But there was a negative side of this mighty kingdom!

THE SLUGS!
All snails of the kingdom looked at them upon disgrace!
I mean, who would want to be like them? No shells? No color, just brown? And they leave slime when they move?
Well, yes that's a slug!
Because of this ugly treating, the slugs made a evil plot! They would kidnap and take the lives of the snaildom children! Once that has been complete....the parents would cry for there child....and the slugs would be happy!

ASSEMBLE YOUR FINEST SNAILS! Yelled the king!
NOT ONE SLUG WILL SURVIVE!

Yes, the plot was succeeded, but also a war broke out!
Slug vs Snail! This was a battle to fight for the snaildom history, peace, and kingdom!

Once on the battle, the warriors pulled out their toberswords and tobershields and charged towards the enemy!
Oops, I forgot to tell you...slugs and snails are really slow, so....

2 HOURS LATER
Finally the snails and slugs clash against each other! Throwing salt at each other, stabbing (poking) each-other until....on each side, there was only one slug, one snail
Damen, and Morgoth!
Damen rode his toberhorse towards Morgoth so fast the when Morgoth blinked...he was down with the rest of his men...not dead...but would soon return to the kingdom!

Damen started his kingdom all over, and gave it max protection for is snails!
Damen was a hero, and the ones who fought on the the front porch of a house!



Morgoth the slug was defeated by the fearless Damen and the snails who risked the live for the kingdom.
It is now a new age for the snails and slugs to began a friendship! But it seems like the slugs will forever hold a grudge against Damen and the snails.
The only members left of the army were Damen, Bob, Nintendo, and Pencil.
The children snails and they were taken back home to by Damen himself.

Damen and the other snails thought there was going to forever be safe again, no slugs, no deaths, only harmony!
Boy, they were so wrong...2 years later, the slugs had Risin again to take the kingdom.
They had the BlackSlugs, Icee Slugs, and the Slugs of course! Morgoth was too weak to lead, Slug Mickey lead for Morgoth.
First to start off, the BlackSlugs rode crows down and dropped bombs everywhere! Nobody survived this in the villages, that ment the only thing left was to defend the king and the castle.

It was a rainy day and it was so dark in day, it looked as it's night....

But when things were looking okay....
To be continued

Review: Damen defeated the fearless Morgoth and ended the battle and war finally it was peaceful again. The children were safe, and the snails had mostly died, but a few survived the battle.
They slugs returned with some power armies and allies, and one day.....

The BlackSlugs and Icee Slugs came in for the kingdom attack, as for the slugs were still to weak to fight! The black lugs brought vultures, hawks, and crows and threw salt all over the royal guards and soldiers of the kingdom. Next they formed bombs and dropped them to distroy the walls so the Icee Sligs could make their move!
The black slugs weren't done yet, the had the vultures come down and pick up the royal army bring them high, and drop them.

Now the Icee slugs came in for the attack, freezing every snail they saw...snail after snail they froze up, and the hawks would bring them so high, higher than the vultures, and dropped the snails, so they would crush to pieces.
The snails were over whelmed and the only thing they could do was defend the king...the outside of the castle was nothing... Only rocks stone and slime....

The snails locked the doors windows and everything for a entrance....
This didn't affect the power combined between Mickey, Black Slugs, and Icee Slugs.
Combining the bomb power, ice power, and the fearless birds, they blasted through the iron walls and just when things looked bad......

To be continued

Just as things were looking bad, the chosen one appeared. It was a everyday snail girl, she very kind, and everyone knew her, but nobody knew she was a chosen one. Her name was Trixie

Anyways.....
The chosen one appeared, with golden armor that couldn't be broken ( a hollow golden nugget) and a sword so strong ( a twig) that it killed enimies just be looking at it.
The slug Miltia slowly crept closer....and it got very quiet.... BUT THEN out of the silence bombs crush the walls and the slugs charge in! it is not a slug to snail battle that will take forever as usaul. The chosen one was fast! She went through, poked, and slimed the Black Slugs. She was on her way to take Mickey out! With the big slug in Trixie's sight Damen out of nowhere grabs a Bow and a stick and fires it at Mickey.

Mickey lost attention to Trixie and focused on Damens constant firing of a bow. This gave Trixie one chance to take mickey out! She goes for his vital spot but mickey was only playing a game...
I moves his bulky hands throws Trixie out the window, but then Mickey gets winged by a stick shot by Damen. Mickey has fallen and has lost.
As soon a Mickey went down, i just seemed the slugs stopped fighting, and just fell.

Trixe hit the ground with a thump.....
Did trxie survive?
TO BE CONTINUED
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20th August 2014, 11:42 AM

Put me in part 2 XD
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20th August 2014, 11:47 AM

Quite an entertaining story that is!
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20th August 2014, 01:41 PM

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Quite an entertaining story that is!
I forget are chapters allowed in storys im going to make a story about snaildom
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20th August 2014, 05:23 PM

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Quite an entertaining story that is!
I forget are chapters allowed in storys im going to make a story about snaildom

Of course, I added chapters into mine - mostly 3-4 paragraphs long. Remember that your story doesn't have to be as long as a real novel!
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20th August 2014, 08:17 PM

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There was a kingdom of snails, lead by the king, Damen, and they we're happy to see that he created the kingdom for them!

It was a peaceful place,harmony, peice, and forever lasting friendship!

But there was a negative side of this mighty kingdom!



THE SLUGS!

All snails of the kingdom looked at them upon disgrace!

I mean, who would want to be like them? No shells? No color, just brown? And they leave slime when they move?

Well, yes that's a slug!

Because of this ugly treating, the slugs made a evil plot! They would kidnap and take the lives of the snaildom children! Once that has been complete....the parents would cry for there child....and the slugs would be happy!



ASSEMBLE YOUR FINEST SNAILS! Yelled the king!

NOT ONE SLUG WILL SURVIVE!



Yes, the plot was succeeded, but also a war broke out!

Slug vs Snail! This was a battle to fight for the snaildom history, peace, and kingdom!



Once on the battle, the warriors pulled out their toberswords and tobershields and charged towards the enemy!

Oops, I forgot to tell you...slugs and snails are really slow, so....



2 HOURS LATER

Finally the snails and slugs clash against each other! Throwing salt at each other, stabbing (poking) each-other until....on each side, there was only one slug, one snail

Damen, and Morgoth!

Damen rode his toberhorse towards Morgoth so fast the when Morgoth blinked...he was down with the rest of his men...not dead...but would soon return to the kingdom!



Damen started his kingdom all over, and gave it max protection for is snails!

Damen was a hero, and the ones who fought on the the front porch of a house!







Morgoth the slug was defeated by the fearless Damen and the snails who risked the live for the kingdom.

It is now a new age for the snails and slugs to began a friendship! But it seems like the slugs will forever hold a grudge against Damen and the snails.

The only members left of the army were Damen, Bob, Nintendo, and Pencil.

The children snails and they were taken back home to by Damen himself.



Damen and the other snails thought there was going to forever be safe again, no slugs, no deaths, only harmony!

Boy, they were so wrong...2 years later, the slugs had Risin again to take the kingdom.

They had the BlackSlugs, Icee Slugs, and the Slugs of course! Morgoth was too weak to lead, Slug Mickey lead for Morgoth.

First to start off, the BlackSlugs rode crows down and dropped bombs everywhere! Nobody survived this in the villages, that ment the only thing left was to defend the king and the castle.



It was a rainy day and it was so dark in day, it looked as it's night....



But when things were looking okay....

To be continued



Review: Damen defeated the fearless Morgoth and ended the battle and war finally it was peaceful again. The children were safe, and the snails had mostly died, but a few survived the battle.

They slugs returned with some power armies and allies, and one day.....



The BlackSlugs and Icee Slugs came in for the kingdom attack, as for the slugs were still to weak to fight! The black lugs brought vultures, hawks, and crows and threw salt all over the royal guards and soldiers of the kingdom. Next they formed bombs and dropped them to distroy the walls so the Icee Sligs could make their move!

The black slugs weren't done yet, the had the vultures come down and pick up the royal army bring them high, and drop them.



Now the Icee slugs came in for the attack, freezing every snail they saw...snail after snail they froze up, and the hawks would bring them so high, higher than the vultures, and dropped the snails, so they would crush to pieces.

The snails were over whelmed and the only thing they could do was defend the king...the outside of the castle was nothing... Only rocks stone and slime....



The snails locked the doors windows and everything for a entrance....

This didn't affect the power combined between Mickey, Black Slugs, and Icee Slugs.

Combining the bomb power, ice power, and the fearless birds, they blasted through the iron walls and just when things looked bad......



To be continued



Just as things were looking bad, the chosen one appeared. It was a everyday snail girl, she very kind, and everyone knew her, but nobody knew she was a chosen one. Her name was Trixie



Anyways.....

The chosen one appeared, with golden armor that couldn't be broken ( a hollow golden nugget) and a sword so strong ( a twig) that it killed enimies just be looking at it.

The slug Miltia slowly crept closer....and it got very quiet.... BUT THEN out of the silence bombs crush the walls and the slugs charge in! it is not a slug to snail battle that will take forever as usaul. The chosen one was fast! She went through, poked, and slimed the Black Slugs. She was on her way to take Mickey out! With the big slug in Trixie's sight Damen out of nowhere grabs a Bow and a stick and fires it at Mickey.



Mickey lost attention to Trixie and focused on Damens constant firing of a bow. This gave Trixie one chance to take mickey out! She goes for his vital spot but mickey was only playing a game...

I moves his bulky hands throws Trixie out the window, but then Mickey gets winged by a stick shot by Damen. Mickey has fallen and has lost.

As soon a Mickey went down, i just seemed the slugs stopped fighting, and just fell.



Trixe hit the ground with a thump.....

Did trxie survive?

TO BE CONTINUED


OMG BEST SNAILDOM STORY
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20th August 2014, 09:32 PM

Great job, I can see you put a great effort into your story.
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Great job, I can see you put a great effort into your story.

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There was a kingdom of snails, lead by the king, Damen, and they we're happy to see that he created the kingdom for them!

Nice



It was a peaceful place,harmony, peice, and forever lasting friendship!



But there was a negative side of this mighty kingdom!







THE SLUGS!



All snails of the kingdom looked at them upon disgrace!



I mean, who would want to be like them? No shells? No color, just brown? And they leave slime when they move?



Well, yes that's a slug!



Because of this ugly treating, the slugs made a evil plot! They would kidnap and take the lives of the snaildom children! Once that has been complete....the parents would cry for there child....and the slugs would be happy!







ASSEMBLE YOUR FINEST SNAILS! Yelled the king!



NOT ONE SLUG WILL SURVIVE!







Yes, the plot was succeeded, but also a war broke out!



Slug vs Snail! This was a battle to fight for the snaildom history, peace, and kingdom!







Once on the battle, the warriors pulled out their toberswords and tobershields and charged towards the enemy!



Oops, I forgot to tell you...slugs and snails are really slow, so....







2 HOURS LATER



Finally the snails and slugs clash against each other! Throwing salt at each other, stabbing (poking) each-other until....on each side, there was only one slug, one snail



Damen, and Morgoth!



Damen rode his toberhorse towards Morgoth so fast the when Morgoth blinked...he was down with the rest of his men...not dead...but would soon return to the kingdom!







Damen started his kingdom all over, and gave it max protection for is snails!



Damen was a hero, and the ones who fought on the the front porch of a house!















Morgoth the slug was defeated by the fearless Damen and the snails who risked the live for the kingdom.



It is now a new age for the snails and slugs to began a friendship! But it seems like the slugs will forever hold a grudge against Damen and the snails.



The only members left of the army were Damen, Bob, Nintendo, and Pencil.



The children snails and they were taken back home to by Damen himself.







Damen and the other snails thought there was going to forever be safe again, no slugs, no deaths, only harmony!



Boy, they were so wrong...2 years later, the slugs had Risin again to take the kingdom.



They had the BlackSlugs, Icee Slugs, and the Slugs of course! Morgoth was too weak to lead, Slug Mickey lead for Morgoth.



First to start off, the BlackSlugs rode crows down and dropped bombs everywhere! Nobody survived this in the villages, that ment the only thing left was to defend the king and the castle.







It was a rainy day and it was so dark in day, it looked as it's night....







But when things were looking okay....



To be continued







Review: Damen defeated the fearless Morgoth and ended the battle and war finally it was peaceful again. The children were safe, and the snails had mostly died, but a few survived the battle.



They slugs returned with some power armies and allies, and one day.....







The BlackSlugs and Icee Slugs came in for the kingdom attack, as for the slugs were still to weak to fight! The black lugs brought vultures, hawks, and crows and threw salt all over the royal guards and soldiers of the kingdom. Next they formed bombs and dropped them to distroy the walls so the Icee Sligs could make their move!



The black slugs weren't done yet, the had the vultures come down and pick up the royal army bring them high, and drop them.







Now the Icee slugs came in for the attack, freezing every snail they saw...snail after snail they froze up, and the hawks would bring them so high, higher than the vultures, and dropped the snails, so they would crush to pieces.



The snails were over whelmed and the only thing they could do was defend the king...the outside of the castle was nothing... Only rocks stone and slime....







The snails locked the doors windows and everything for a entrance....



This didn't affect the power combined between Mickey, Black Slugs, and Icee Slugs.



Combining the bomb power, ice power, and the fearless birds, they blasted through the iron walls and just when things looked bad......







To be continued







Just as things were looking bad, the chosen one appeared. It was a everyday snail girl, she very kind, and everyone knew her, but nobody knew she was a chosen one. Her name was Trixie







Anyways.....



The chosen one appeared, with golden armor that couldn't be broken ( a hollow golden nugget) and a sword so strong ( a twig) that it killed enimies just be looking at it.



The slug Miltia slowly crept closer....and it got very quiet.... BUT THEN out of the silence bombs crush the walls and the slugs charge in! it is not a slug to snail battle that will take forever as usaul. The chosen one was fast! She went through, poked, and slimed the Black Slugs. She was on her way to take Mickey out! With the big slug in Trixie's sight Damen out of nowhere grabs a Bow and a stick and fires it at Mickey.







Mickey lost attention to Trixie and focused on Damens constant firing of a bow. This gave Trixie one chance to take mickey out! She goes for his vital spot but mickey was only playing a game...



I moves his bulky hands throws Trixie out the window, but then Mickey gets winged by a stick shot by Damen. Mickey has fallen and has lost.



As soon a Mickey went down, i just seemed the slugs stopped fighting, and just fell.







Trixe hit the ground with a thump.....



Did trxie survive?



TO BE CONTINUED





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21st August 2014, 09:16 AM

Amazing story! You make better stories then my sister XD

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21st August 2014, 10:32 AM

I just love this story its amazing, fantastic.
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21st August 2014, 03:01 PM

Amazing, just truly amazing story, PenguinManiac. +1 coming your way. ;)
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21st August 2014, 04:18 PM

I enjoyed it a ton! I think you should be a pro for snaildom... Good luck with your story.. I bless you for this enjoyment :)
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22nd August 2014, 04:56 AM

OMG. Give me more! Its amazing! :D
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