Hello, I am here to retry for the 'Detective' job on OldCP.Biz, without further ado, here it is!

Name on OldCP.Biz: Jake01 (forums name=Jake01)

Age: 10 yrs old

Joined forums and OldCP: Both around April/May


WHY BE DETECTIVE?

I am an ideal user for this job due to my skills and experience. I want to be a detective in order to help OldCP.Biz from any clues of attacks/kills etc. Additionally, I would like to be a detective due to the fact I could go on missions and find lots of things; I could even gain trust if I ever were to be associated in a mission to get an Icelord or something along those lines!

EXPERIENCE?

I have helped the detectives a lot during the past 5 months, I helped in the 'Morgoth' case and 'BH base' case a lot. I even made a theory about Bot which is true (that body was fake!). I also have lots of experience out of this virtual world, I cracked many cases in school, one of them contained me going undercover, I done it successfully. I have many skills such as: Proof/evidence, creative and potentially true theories, trusted, great at missions or taking actions.

OUTRO

Thank you for reading this application for Detective, I would also like to thank Minty and Adawg, the top 2 detectives for recommending me to Damen, I am steps closer to this dream job! Also, I would possibly like to know your comments on this, despite the fact it's short for a mega job like this! Once again, I thank you for reading this, I put my heart, mind and most importantly soul to make this and hopefully EARN this!

~Jake01

Stunning Application I Hope You Get Even A Higher Job 1+

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Stunning Application I Hope You Get Even A Higher Job 1+

Thank you very much, that is really kind of you to say that

I don't want to sound mean or anything but a detective needs a very clear mind to who he must trust and who he should not trust. Also a detective must also find out if that clue is fake or if it's true. You may have a lack of that but I would consider you as a detective counsult. Anyways good application

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I don't want to sound mean or anything but a detective needs a very clear mind to who he must trust and who he should not trust. Also a detective must also find out if that clue is fake or if it's true. You may have a lack of that but I would consider you as a detective counsult. Anyways good application

I agree, I will work on what I lack on in order to be an official detective, I may not have a lack in the fake clues as the clue of bot's dead body was fake
due to size and things like that

STOP DISLIKING MY POSTS HAMSTER!


I hate it! Your disliking all of them for no reason! Just cos your not a member


UGH now this will become drama because of YOU, i'll never get close to det now!

This is a very fine Detective Application, Jake. As bashy said, a Det. does need a clear mind, and to be on his toes at all times. Remember Jake, this job comes with danger, and if you want to accept that, be my guest.

Anyway Good App!

~Adawg

PS. Hamster, stop disliking posts

Nice Post Jake!
I Wish You Best Of Luck In The Future!

???? I'm not disliking posts jake stop disliking all my posts And blame It on me.... -.-

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Listen dude.... I'm sorry for abusing you I just get out of controll wanna be friends again?

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Dont triple post. Also i will ask a Moderator to Lock this disscussion. Its basiclly causing drama

Uh I wanna be friends with jake

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Uh I wanna be friends with jake

All your doing is pointless posts. Seriously please stop!

If u don't like me I can quit but I got help!!!