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+1 . Don't forget to reply on my Wise app. Whether its good or bad just comment!

Great application! I think you really deserve this! +1

Hey! I like your application, but I noticed that you capitalize every word. Please try to work on not capitalizing every word. Also, how long have you been playing on Forums, and how old are you? Other than those minor issues, your application was very nice. +1.

This was quite a decent application, but I'd suggest adding a bit more detail about yourself as Bella had stated, and not capitalizing every word you use in sentences. That way your readers will have a better and easier time while looking over your discussions, and they will also see that you use correct grammar. Overall, I think this post was interesting and I see you fit the requirements for Master, so I believe you will become one soon enough. But I would also recommend explaining the reasons why you'd want this position and what you'd do while you have this rank, so the users viewing your discussion will see that you are ready for this responsibility. And that you could fit this position more than they think. Other than that, I think it is fine, but try to use reasoning in your posts to grab the user's attention instead of stating facts about what you would do if you became a Master.

Good advice Livetodance, add some more detail.

one word DETAIL +1 but caps does Not Mean This but i understnad why your doing it because it looks smart and your lucky im just a ROOKIE i wish i was member..