Christ is King
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Forrester
30th September 2014, 01:07 PM
Hello everyone! I'm Crowflying. Here is my poem I made up. I hope you like it!
Nature is Amazing
The sun is always shining,
The birds are always flying,
The leaves are on their branches,
The animals at their ranches,
The grass is always green,
When there's thunder, there's always lightning,
The dogs will always bark,
This poem was made from the heart
~Crowflying
Thanks for reading my poem! Tell me what you think! Like or Dislike!
Nature is Amazing
The sun is always shining,
The birds are always flying,
The leaves are on their branches,
The animals at their ranches,
The grass is always green,
When there's thunder, there's always lightning,
The dogs will always bark,
This poem was made from the heart
~Crowflying
Thanks for reading my poem! Tell me what you think! Like or Dislike!
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30th September 2014, 01:13 PM
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Hello everyone! I'm Crowflying. Here is my poem I made up. I hope you like it!
Nature is Amazing
The sun is always shining,
The birds are always flying,
The leaves are on their branches,
The animals at their ranches,
The grass is always green,
When there's thunder, there's always lightning,
The dogs will always bark,
This poem was made from the heart
~Crowflying
Thanks for reading my poem! Tell me what you think! Like or Dislike!
Nature is Amazing
The sun is always shining,
The birds are always flying,
The leaves are on their branches,
The animals at their ranches,
The grass is always green,
When there's thunder, there's always lightning,
The dogs will always bark,
This poem was made from the heart
~Crowflying
Thanks for reading my poem! Tell me what you think! Like or Dislike!
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Wizard
30th September 2014, 01:35 PM
i think that was one of the best poems yet +1.
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Freehawk
30th September 2014, 03:14 PM
Hello.
Despite the fact your poem doesn't really have a lot of rhyme, I still admire the fact you used your heart in this poem. You used nature,
something all of us experienced. So, I think your poem is thoughtful, overall. +1
Despite the fact your poem doesn't really have a lot of rhyme, I still admire the fact you used your heart in this poem. You used nature,
something all of us experienced. So, I think your poem is thoughtful, overall. +1
Christ is King
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30th September 2014, 03:20 PM
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Hello.
Despite the fact your poem doesn't really have a lot of rhyme, I still admire the fact you used your heart in this poem. You used nature,
something all of us experienced. So, I think your poem is thoughtful, overall. +1
Despite the fact your poem doesn't really have a lot of rhyme, I still admire the fact you used your heart in this poem. You used nature,
something all of us experienced. So, I think your poem is thoughtful, overall. +1
Actually, it does rhyme. Lol!
Christ is King
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30th September 2014, 03:20 PM
Quote:
Hello.
Despite the fact your poem doesn't really have a lot of rhyme, I still admire the fact you used your heart in this poem. You used nature,
something all of us experienced. So, I think your poem is thoughtful, overall. +1
Despite the fact your poem doesn't really have a lot of rhyme, I still admire the fact you used your heart in this poem. You used nature,
something all of us experienced. So, I think your poem is thoughtful, overall. +1
But, thank you very much for the nice comment! I really appreciate it!
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Khrysalis
30th September 2014, 06:12 PM
Wow I really like this poem. I love nature. 
I'm terrible at making poems. I like making short stories more, but that's not the point of me posting. Very good poem. +1 from me. 
I'm terrible at making poems. I like making short stories more, but that's not the point of me posting. Very good poem. +1 from me. 
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4th October 2014, 10:29 AM
I want more poems!
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