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21st December 2014, 06:12 PM
1st story Written by me
The Mine
By: Redball
Once upon a time in Minecraft, there was a guy named Bryan. He went down his mine in search of diamonds. He expanded his mine and ran into an abandoned mineshaft. He was going to run when he saw a glow. He went down The mineshaft to see what it was. He went over and saw it was diamonds. Just as he was going to mine them, 5 spiders got in his way. He promised to make them houses if they let him mine the diamonds. The spiders said, "You can have it long as you build the houses by tomorrow! And if you kill us or not build the houses we will call for the Enderman and Ender Dragon to kill you!" He mined the diamonds and went home. There he crafted diamond armor and a diamond sword. He built the houses for the spiders. out of Sponges. The next day, a griefer came in and destroyed the houses. The spiders were furious and thought it was the player. So the spiders called the Enderman And Ender Dragon to kill him. He fought and killed the Enderman and the Ender Dragon. But, His house was a disaster.
3 years later, he rebuild his house and furious to take his revenge. He already destroyed The Nether and killed Herobrine and he owns the Nether castle. But, constantly mobs come in and attempt to kill him but he slays them quickly. He was ready to go to The End to take his revenge by killing all The Ender Dragons and all The Endermen. But, when he went there, no mob was in sight. He looked all over and found none. He was thinking someone already killed them all. He went to his world and looked in his chests there was nothing someone had robbed him! So he searched the world for 6 months and couldn't find his stuff anywhere. He sighed and said "who could've stolen by stuff! Then he realized it could've been the Endermen so he went to the portal and was suprised by 40 endermen! He fought them off and realized how could it get worse! So he jumped in the portal and saw no mob in sight then he looked behind him and dropped all his stuff and then was immediately killed by an Ender Dragon.
The END!
P.S. This took me over 20 minutes to make!
P.S.S. Can you please give me feed back on my next story?
The Mine
By: Redball
Once upon a time in Minecraft, there was a guy named Bryan. He went down his mine in search of diamonds. He expanded his mine and ran into an abandoned mineshaft. He was going to run when he saw a glow. He went down The mineshaft to see what it was. He went over and saw it was diamonds. Just as he was going to mine them, 5 spiders got in his way. He promised to make them houses if they let him mine the diamonds. The spiders said, "You can have it long as you build the houses by tomorrow! And if you kill us or not build the houses we will call for the Enderman and Ender Dragon to kill you!" He mined the diamonds and went home. There he crafted diamond armor and a diamond sword. He built the houses for the spiders. out of Sponges. The next day, a griefer came in and destroyed the houses. The spiders were furious and thought it was the player. So the spiders called the Enderman And Ender Dragon to kill him. He fought and killed the Enderman and the Ender Dragon. But, His house was a disaster.
3 years later, he rebuild his house and furious to take his revenge. He already destroyed The Nether and killed Herobrine and he owns the Nether castle. But, constantly mobs come in and attempt to kill him but he slays them quickly. He was ready to go to The End to take his revenge by killing all The Ender Dragons and all The Endermen. But, when he went there, no mob was in sight. He looked all over and found none. He was thinking someone already killed them all. He went to his world and looked in his chests there was nothing someone had robbed him! So he searched the world for 6 months and couldn't find his stuff anywhere. He sighed and said "who could've stolen by stuff! Then he realized it could've been the Endermen so he went to the portal and was suprised by 40 endermen! He fought them off and realized how could it get worse! So he jumped in the portal and saw no mob in sight then he looked behind him and dropped all his stuff and then was immediately killed by an Ender Dragon.
The END!
P.S. This took me over 20 minutes to make!
P.S.S. Can you please give me feed back on my next story?
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21st December 2014, 06:30 PM
Nice story!
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1st story Written by me
The Mine
By: Redball
Once upon a time in Minecraft, there was a guy named Bryan. He went down his mine in search of diamonds. He expanded his mine and ran into an abandoned mineshaft. He was going to run when he saw a glow. He went down The mineshaft to see what it was. He went over and saw it was diamonds. Just as he was going to mine them, 5 spiders got in his way. He promised to make them houses if they let him mine the diamonds. The spiders said, "You can have it long as you build the houses by tomorrow! And if you kill us or not build the houses we will call for the Enderman and Ender Dragon to kill you!" He mined the diamonds and went home. There he crafted diamond armor and a diamond sword. He built the houses for the spiders. out of Sponges. The next day, a griefer came in and destroyed the houses. The spiders were furious and thought it was the player. So the spiders called the Enderman And Ender Dragon to kill him. He fought and killed the Enderman and the Ender Dragon. But, His house was a disaster.
3 years later, he rebuild his house and furious to take his revenge. He already destroyed The Nether and killed Herobrine and he owns the Nether castle. But, constantly mobs come in and attempt to kill him but he slays them quickly. He was ready to go to The End to take his revenge by killing all The Ender Dragons and all The Endermen. But, when he went there, no mob was in sight. He looked all over and found none. He was thinking someone already killed them all. He went to his world and looked in his chests there was nothing someone had robbed him! So he searched the world for 6 months and couldn't find his stuff anywhere. He sighed and said "who could've stolen by stuff! Then he realized it could've been the Endermen so he went to the portal and was suprised by 40 endermen! He fought them off and realized how could it get worse! So he jumped in the portal and saw no mob in sight then he looked behind him and dropped all his stuff and then was immediately killed by an Ender Dragon.
The END!
P.S. This took me over 20 minutes to make!
P.S.S. Can you please give me feed back on my next story?
The Mine
By: Redball
Once upon a time in Minecraft, there was a guy named Bryan. He went down his mine in search of diamonds. He expanded his mine and ran into an abandoned mineshaft. He was going to run when he saw a glow. He went down The mineshaft to see what it was. He went over and saw it was diamonds. Just as he was going to mine them, 5 spiders got in his way. He promised to make them houses if they let him mine the diamonds. The spiders said, "You can have it long as you build the houses by tomorrow! And if you kill us or not build the houses we will call for the Enderman and Ender Dragon to kill you!" He mined the diamonds and went home. There he crafted diamond armor and a diamond sword. He built the houses for the spiders. out of Sponges. The next day, a griefer came in and destroyed the houses. The spiders were furious and thought it was the player. So the spiders called the Enderman And Ender Dragon to kill him. He fought and killed the Enderman and the Ender Dragon. But, His house was a disaster.
3 years later, he rebuild his house and furious to take his revenge. He already destroyed The Nether and killed Herobrine and he owns the Nether castle. But, constantly mobs come in and attempt to kill him but he slays them quickly. He was ready to go to The End to take his revenge by killing all The Ender Dragons and all The Endermen. But, when he went there, no mob was in sight. He looked all over and found none. He was thinking someone already killed them all. He went to his world and looked in his chests there was nothing someone had robbed him! So he searched the world for 6 months and couldn't find his stuff anywhere. He sighed and said "who could've stolen by stuff! Then he realized it could've been the Endermen so he went to the portal and was suprised by 40 endermen! He fought them off and realized how could it get worse! So he jumped in the portal and saw no mob in sight then he looked behind him and dropped all his stuff and then was immediately killed by an Ender Dragon.
The END!
P.S. This took me over 20 minutes to make!
P.S.S. Can you please give me feed back on my next story?
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21st December 2014, 06:40 PM
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Nice story!
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1st story Written by me
The Mine
By: Redball
Once upon a time in Minecraft, there was a guy named Bryan. He went down his mine in search of diamonds. He expanded his mine and ran into an abandoned mineshaft. He was going to run when he saw a glow. He went down The mineshaft to see what it was. He went over and saw it was diamonds. Just as he was going to mine them, 5 spiders got in his way. He promised to make them houses if they let him mine the diamonds. The spiders said, "You can have it long as you build the houses by tomorrow! And if you kill us or not build the houses we will call for the Enderman and Ender Dragon to kill you!" He mined the diamonds and went home. There he crafted diamond armor and a diamond sword. He built the houses for the spiders. out of Sponges. The next day, a griefer came in and destroyed the houses. The spiders were furious and thought it was the player. So the spiders called the Enderman And Ender Dragon to kill him. He fought and killed the Enderman and the Ender Dragon. But, His house was a disaster.
3 years later, he rebuild his house and furious to take his revenge. He already destroyed The Nether and killed Herobrine and he owns the Nether castle. But, constantly mobs come in and attempt to kill him but he slays them quickly. He was ready to go to The End to take his revenge by killing all The Ender Dragons and all The Endermen. But, when he went there, no mob was in sight. He looked all over and found none. He was thinking someone already killed them all. He went to his world and looked in his chests there was nothing someone had robbed him! So he searched the world for 6 months and couldn't find his stuff anywhere. He sighed and said "who could've stolen by stuff! Then he realized it could've been the Endermen so he went to the portal and was suprised by 40 endermen! He fought them off and realized how could it get worse! So he jumped in the portal and saw no mob in sight then he looked behind him and dropped all his stuff and then was immediately killed by an Ender Dragon.
The END!
P.S. This took me over 20 minutes to make!
P.S.S. Can you please give me feed back on my next story?
Quote:
1st story Written by me
The Mine
By: Redball
Once upon a time in Minecraft, there was a guy named Bryan. He went down his mine in search of diamonds. He expanded his mine and ran into an abandoned mineshaft. He was going to run when he saw a glow. He went down The mineshaft to see what it was. He went over and saw it was diamonds. Just as he was going to mine them, 5 spiders got in his way. He promised to make them houses if they let him mine the diamonds. The spiders said, "You can have it long as you build the houses by tomorrow! And if you kill us or not build the houses we will call for the Enderman and Ender Dragon to kill you!" He mined the diamonds and went home. There he crafted diamond armor and a diamond sword. He built the houses for the spiders. out of Sponges. The next day, a griefer came in and destroyed the houses. The spiders were furious and thought it was the player. So the spiders called the Enderman And Ender Dragon to kill him. He fought and killed the Enderman and the Ender Dragon. But, His house was a disaster.
3 years later, he rebuild his house and furious to take his revenge. He already destroyed The Nether and killed Herobrine and he owns the Nether castle. But, constantly mobs come in and attempt to kill him but he slays them quickly. He was ready to go to The End to take his revenge by killing all The Ender Dragons and all The Endermen. But, when he went there, no mob was in sight. He looked all over and found none. He was thinking someone already killed them all. He went to his world and looked in his chests there was nothing someone had robbed him! So he searched the world for 6 months and couldn't find his stuff anywhere. He sighed and said "who could've stolen by stuff! Then he realized it could've been the Endermen so he went to the portal and was suprised by 40 endermen! He fought them off and realized how could it get worse! So he jumped in the portal and saw no mob in sight then he looked behind him and dropped all his stuff and then was immediately killed by an Ender Dragon.
The END!
P.S. This took me over 20 minutes to make!
P.S.S. Can you please give me feed back on my next story?
Thank you!
~~~
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