26th December 2014
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Think Before You Act

Made by McKinlee in Wisdom

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26th December 2014, 06:19 PM

Hi, Im Mckinlee here with a poem that inspired me, and I want to pass it on to possibly inspire you!


The day is cold,
Theres nothing else you could lose.
Or so you thought.
Then like that,
Its all black.
And you don't know where to go.
Then out of the blue,
A hand reaches out to you.
Screaming and yelling,
Please don't go.
We need you here.
You reach out,
But it seems so far.
Then you hear a voice say,
Come back I can't lose you now.
I reach again for the hand,
This time you brush the finger tips.
Thinking just a little more.
One more reach,
And the grip is tight.
Knowing they won't let go,
You give it all your might.
And up you go away from the light,
Into the arms of a dearest friend.
Termbleing, and saying,
Don't ever jump again.
You hold on tight,
Saying thank you my friend,
For if not for you I wouldn't be here tonight.


(Think before you do something rash.
For you may not see it but theres all ways loved ones.
They come in family, friends, even strangers. So
Think before you act.)


POEM BYYYYY~ Shelby Hopple

I hope this inspired you today
~ Mckinlee

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26th December 2014, 06:32 PM

More than you realize.
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26th December 2014, 09:08 PM

Quote:
More than you realize.

Really? Thank you!

~Mckinlee
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27th December 2014, 11:17 AM

Nice poem, inspiring and good :) +1!
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27th December 2014, 11:43 AM

Excellent poem.
It has a moral to the story.

-Rasberry.
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27th December 2014, 08:40 PM

Quote:
Quote:
More than you realize.


Really? Thank you!

~Mckinlee
Did you want me to lie? LOLJK no problem.
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