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The Detectives: The Story So Far [Part 3]

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6th August 2015, 05:05 AM

Chapter 8
Return of the Sith! The Blackhawks were back! But this time they chose a very bad time to return. It was the fall of 2014.



Who remembers that!?

Yes, the Blackhawks were back and their leader was called Mais. He was working for Mickey to steal stuff again! (Which is the whole point of the blackhawks, they steal for Mickey)

"I want... hmmm, the puffle off the pet shop! That would do nicely on NewCP!" said Mickey
"Yes sir" said Mais

Immediately, the Pet Shop puffle sign was stolen! The detectives looked everywhere, and they found it at a jr room called ava.

"W T F?" said Hashir
They got it back and put it in the puffle shop.

"Mais? Mais? WHERE ARE U?" Mickey complained. But Mais was nowhere... what happened?

Chapter 9
Mais was murdered! A much more evil power was on OldCP



"An evil has come to OldCP! It is the Queen of the Undead, Snowfalls!" Mickey said, "ACTIVATE CLOAKING DEVICE!" *rips pants*



So the Blackhawks could not defeat the new threat, THE ICE GHOSTS! Now OldCP had to fight instead of investigate!

Chapter 10
Winter was almost here... And for almost 6 months the ice ghosts attacked OldCP. The Ice Children (Forest Boys) were making prophecies about these Ice Ghosts.

"They will take over but then the Queen of the Ice will be slain" said the Forest Boy

Months later, the Ice King and Ice Queen launched the attack everyone was waiting for... they had taken over OldCP after Snaildom went down and now they wanted us out!

The Forest Boys helped destroy the Blackhawks before, and now they were helping to destroy the Ice Ghosts. Uzu, an evil commander, hacker cracked the beach. He was the first attacker, he was defeated by Tennis.



This was on DamensDay 2014, in the thick of winter. The battle continued... Raegon the Ice King came to attack! This was the greatest battle! At the same time Snowfalls came, wearing the Jiniri Crown!

She struck down many and made them undead iceghots. But Gamer the Great stood at the edge of time and made his attack. Snowfalls resisted, but Gamer struck well and destroyed Snowfalls once and for all!

The Jiniri crown was taken by Raegon and took it to the Evil Temple (which is being searched for today). Raegon then went to make his move, he went to the Rocketsnail Thrones and killed many knights. But a certain Knight was valiant and brave....



Bp28 fought Raegon all accross OldCP, all the way to the Forest where Bp28 jumped into the air and Raegon rawred, but Bp28's sword came down strong and with a shining fury, landed into Raegon and destroyed him once and for all! At this, the end of the Ice Ghosts was... and OldCP was at peace....

Tennis became Tennis the Great. Gamer became Gamer the Great, Ice Queen Slayer. Then Bp28 became The Great Bp28, Ice King slayer.

And it was said "BP28 SENT RAEGON THE ICE KING BACK TO ADVENTURE TIME!"

OldCP was now at peace... Until 2015.
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+1 by The Shadow Knight, Mercer, Kris, sans and 24 others

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6th August 2015, 05:11 AM

Niice. Can't wait for part 4! :D

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+1 by George

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6th August 2015, 05:25 AM

Wow, I'm the second comment on this. Wait till the discussion has like 100 likes or something like that. Hopefully there will be a Part 4, CAN'T WAIT!
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6th August 2015, 05:46 AM

Ooh, That ending grabbed my attention! Another great story, Can't wait for part 5!
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6th August 2015, 06:26 AM

Look everyone thats my fat head next to Mais!
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6th August 2015, 06:31 AM

woohoo finally someone puts me in a story, lol, I remember when Snowfalls kidnapped me, The forest boys told her that I was Damen and she kidnapped me -_- But the forest boys were clearly trying to protect the real Damen lol
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6th August 2015, 06:45 AM

Lovely stories Damen, can't wait for the next part, if there is one...
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+1 by rami

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6th August 2015, 06:55 AM

Damen Drake wrote on 6th August 2015 05:05 AM:
Chapter 8
Return of the Sith! The Blackhawks were back! But this time they chose a very bad time to return. It was the fall of 2014.



Who remembers that!?

Yes, the Blackhawks were back and their leader was called Mais. He was working for Mickey to steal stuff again! (Which is the whole point of the blackhawks, they steal for Mickey)

"I want... hmmm, the puffle off the pet shop! That would do nicely on NewCP!" said Mickey
"Yes sir" said Mais

Immediately, the Pet Shop puffle sign was stolen! The detectives looked everywhere, and they found it at a jr room called ava.

"W T F?" said Hashir
They got it back and put it in the puffle shop.

"Mais? Mais? WHERE ARE U?" Mickey complained. But Mais was nowhere... what happened?

Chapter 9
Mais was murdered! A much more evil power was on OldCP



"An evil has come to OldCP! It is the Queen of the Undead, Snowfalls!" Mickey said, "ACTIVATE CLOAKING DEVICE!" *rips pants*



So the Blackhawks could not defeat the new threat, THE ICE GHOSTS! Now OldCP had to fight instead of investigate!

Chapter 10
Winter was almost here... And for almost 6 months the ice ghosts attacked OldCP. The Ice Children (Forest Boys) were making prophecies about these Ice Ghosts.

"They will take over but then the Queen of the Ice will be slain" said the Forest Boy

Months later, the Ice King and Ice Queen launched the attack everyone was waiting for... they had taken over OldCP after Snaildom went down and now they wanted us out!

The Forest Boys helped destroy the Blackhawks before, and now they were helping to destroy the Ice Ghosts. Uzu, an evil commander, hacker cracked the beach. He was the first attacker, he was defeated by Tennis.



This was on DamensDay 2014, in the thick of winter. The battle continued... Raegon the Ice King came to attack! This was the greatest battle! At the same time Snowfalls came, wearing the Jiniri Crown!

She struck down many and made them undead iceghots. But Gamer the Great stood at the edge of time and made his attack. Snowfalls resisted, but Gamer struck well and destroyed Snowfalls once and for all!

The Jiniri crown was taken by Raegon and took it to the Evil Temple (which is being searched for today). Raegon then went to make his move, he went to the Rocketsnail Thrones and killed many knights. But a certain Knight was valiant and brave....



Bp28 fought Raegon all accross OldCP, all the way to the Forest where Bp28 jumped into the air and Raegon rawred, but Bp28's sword came down strong and with a shining fury, landed into Raegon and destroyed him once and for all! At this, the end of the Ice Ghosts was... and OldCP was at peace....

Tennis became Tennis the Great. Gamer became Gamer the Great, Ice Queen Slayer. Then Bp28 became The Great Bp28, Ice King slayer.

And it was said "BP28 SENT RAEGON THE ICE KING BACK TO ADVENTURE TIME!"

OldCP was now at peace... Until 2015.

You used 'wtf' and isn't that cuss? Also, great story and I like how you used the picture of the fat guy from simpson (hehe). Next time make me involved in roleplay. Mais is gone, Maists is here anyways.
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6th August 2015, 07:34 AM

Part 4 probably includes Shrek, Right Damen?
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+1 by habsolo

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6th August 2015, 07:55 AM

Gamer The Great wrote on 6th August 2015 06:31 AM:
woohoo finally someone puts me in a story, lol, I remember when Snowfalls kidnapped me, The forest boys told her that I was Damen and she kidnapped me -_- But the forest boys were clearly trying to protect the real Damen lol
LOL, SACRIFICE YOURSELF FOR DAMEN!!

On a serious note: Really cool stories, and I love the history, I found about these from the Wiki, so I advise everyone to read the Wikis too, they're quite a fun. :)
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  • "Behind this mask there is more than just flesh. Beneath this mask there is an idea... and ideas are bulletproof." -V

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6th August 2015, 08:08 AM

CAN YOU SEND ME PART 4 NOW SINCE I'M SO SPECIAL SO I GET A COPY BEFORE EVERYONE ELSE?

Just kidding. I rate you infinity kutos out of 10. :star: :star: :star: :star: :star:
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6th August 2015, 09:30 AM

loool love the story! But I did not say "W T F" and I know it's a joke :P
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+1 by rami
"Behind this mask there is more than just flesh. Beneath this mask there is an idea... and ideas are bulletproof." -V

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6th August 2015, 09:49 AM

OH YES YES YES!!!!
PLOT TWISTS!!!
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6th August 2015, 02:27 PM

Oh my goodness, this is such an amazing story. Keep 'em coming!


NOTE: I cringe sometimes when I see Tennis is not a Prince in these photos. Takes me back to old times.
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6th August 2015, 02:50 PM

Omg no Mais he died well amazing story 1 + more than definitely I love it u should be an author
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