6th August 2015
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The Detectives: The Story So Far [Part 4]

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6th August 2015, 02:23 PM
dis is amazing Sure hard to do But still Awesome Damen!! I Hope u Make number 5 Keep up The Amazing Work ;)
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6th August 2015, 02:30 PM
Wow, what an ending. Also,
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6th August 2015, 02:50 PM
Amandapink30 wrote on 6th August 2015 02:30 PM:
Wow, what an ending. Also,
 LOL GOOD EYE.

And good story!
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6th August 2015, 02:53 PM
I'm speechless I never will stop admiring this stories 1+ if I could I would do 1,0000,00000,0000 likes amazing
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6th August 2015, 03:14 PM
Oh, Oh my 0.0. The history among this is truly...Surprising, I never knew this is what happened. But You can always get something from the history. This is a great thing you are doing Damen.
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6th August 2015, 03:59 PM
Extraordinary. I take the time to read all of these and I just find them so interesting. The history hooks me a lot.. also the images make it feel like while you're reading you truly are in the scene itself.

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6th August 2015, 04:28 PM
For some reason, I really really really enjoy this story! :)
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6th August 2015, 05:59 PM
I like how you've made it interesting by adding in funny dialogue :P It looks like that's taken you ages!
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6th August 2015, 10:35 PM
O M G! I AM REALLY ADDICTED TO THIS SERIES! I NEED PART 5 LIKE NOWWWWWW
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7th August 2015, 01:28 AM
This part was amazing. This means that the Temple of Jin is under the mountain in a cave.
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7th August 2015, 03:29 PM
is a great way of the year best thing to ever play it on my iPhone and iPod and it is will I get my a game in of
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8th August 2015, 12:59 PM
Awesome stories! The picture of mickey is really interesting I think! Keep up the FABULOUS work, Damen!

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8th August 2015, 01:31 PM
This is so awesome!!! I want to learn to write from you! :D DAMEN4WRITER!
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8th August 2015, 08:35 PM
First one i have read. Is this supposed to be based off what is happening now?
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23rd August 2015, 02:22 AM
this is a amazing post and a great part of history it makes you want to know more.
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