10th August 2015
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The Detectives: The Story So Far [Part 5]
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10th August 2015, 03:56 PM
This episode is placed back 80 oldcp years ago.
PREVIOUSLY ON THE DETECTIVES THE STORY SO FAR: http://forums.damenspike.com/view/47450/
Chapter 12
Rsnail was on the run from Mickey. It had been 2 days since he escaped from Clegane. He had made it as far as the Dojo, where his secret Ninjas were.
"WHERE IS RSNAIL!!!" Mickey shouted in anger. He wanted to have him and his island before their evil plot began.
Rsnail was already beginning his search for the Tomb of the Jin where lies the Queen of the Undead's grave. Rsnail had also arranged for the Grand Most Wise of the Court to meet him at the Dojo, where he would bring important books to study and a very rare item that would help them with their quest.
"Here it is" said Grand Most Wise Roman.
"Excellent! This will help for sure. Now we just got to figure out how this thing helps." Rsnail replied.
Roman had handed him an old crown with two jewels on either side and in the middle, a beautiful crystal. It had once been a Princesse's crown, because it was smaller than any other kind. It must have been meant for a child, one that may have never existed.
"The Crown with Two Jewels, and here is the research." Roman said as he opened a large boring book.
"Agh! We need to read all of this?" Rsnail complained
Roman coughed mucus as he laughed.
"No no no nay! On page 38281 there is information about this specimen.", Roman laughed "Here. It reads:
"What does it all mean then? The Old Way has been lost for countless years. Even I do not know where to go?" Rsnail said
Roman nodded, "Indeed, The Old Way has been lost. But don't forget we have this crown now. Perhaps the Ski Mountain will have clues?"
"It might... Alright then. We'll hike to the Ski Hill and with our Ninja skills nobody will spot us." Rsnail replied
"Yes yes but be careful though. Do not under estimate the abilities of Lord Mickey." Roman warned
Chapter 13
Rsnail and 5 Ninjas were hiking through the desert snow mountains. They were all carrying heavy gear and lots of warm clothes in the coldest part of Club Penguin. By the second week of hiking they had reached the end of the cold mountains.
From the edge of an icy cliff they could see all of Club Penguin. A white haze of different things stretching hundreds of kilometers. In the distance they could see the tallest mountain on the island, The Ski Hill. That is where they were heading for the next day.
Rsnail lit a fire and everyone slept close together during their final super cold night.
Whilst they were sleeping Rsnail was troubled by strange dreams. He woke up suddenly, and he could hear the slight sound of snow crushing under someones feet. In fact, there were many but far away. He thought it was just the wind. Two hours later he woke again, but this time he saw something. He got up and looked.
He saw a carriage not too far away journeying towards them at some speed. Banners flocked in the moonlight and soldiers voices were calling. They could see him. Rsnail quickly woke the others and grabbed the Crown and Two Jewels. He hid it in a snow hole and readied his sword.
They all gathered together in a circle.
"Look! Some peasant hikers trying to escape from Mickey's ships! Get them!" a soldier shouted
Twelve soldiers dismounted the carriage and drew their swords. They charged towards them.
The ninjas double flipped and rolled under the soldiers sword and counter struck two of them in the stomach.
"Aghhh!" they cried as they fell down dead.
Rsnail engaged two of them, blocking their swipes. A ninja saw rsnail was in trouble and charged, stabbing one of the soldiers. Rsnail dodged the other sword swing and back kicked a soldier. There were nine left, too many.
"Give it up you bunch of worms!" one said
The Ninjas gritted their teeth and Rsnail grabbed both hinges of his sword.
"No? Alright then! Kill them!" the soldier said
The ninjas charged together with Rsnail and cut down two more soldiers, but they all came for Rsnail at once. The ninjas tried to help but they had an archer firing from the cart. An arrow hit rsnail in the shoulder and he fell, smashing his head against a rock and became unconscious.
Chapter 14
Rsnail woke. His head was pounding with pain. He slowly lifted his head to look around. He noticed it was daytime and he was traveling through a camp of soldiers all rushing to get prepared to move out. He was near the shore because he saw ship sails in the distance. He thought to himself that he must have been unconscious for days.
He knew that Mickey was forcing everyone out to make it easier to rip apart the island to search for the Jin Temple. He wondered where his Ninjas were. Then, he noticed that they were in another carriage behind his.
He tried to move his arms but his hands were bounded together.
About half an hour later they had moved to a quieter area and their carriage stopped moving. Then a penguin got out
"Alright, we'll get these carriages on board as soon as the next ship arrives." he said.
Rsnail started to loose hope. His Ninjas must be bound up too and the Crown and Two Jewels was now miles away at the outpost where he was injured. He closed his eyes and breathed deeply in sorrow. He imagined Mickey sitting on his Helmet Throne with an army of undead ghosts killing all the innocent citizens.
Suddenly, there was a cry of pain followed by a sword swing. Rsnail looked up behind him to see. There was a Knight dressed in silver armor battling with two Disney Soldiers. Rsnail didn't know who it was, but it was a very good warrior. Within 10 seconds he had slain both of his opponents.
The Knight then jumped up onto rsnails carriage.
"My King! You are safe now" said the Knight
"Sir Galmond! You have risked much saving me." Rsnail replied great fully
"It is my honor, but we must be quick. The next ship is not too far away and all of them are full of Mickey's men. Come quickly, I shall free the Ninjas."
"Thank you!"
To be continued....
PREVIOUSLY ON THE DETECTIVES THE STORY SO FAR: http://forums.damenspike.com/view/47450/
Chapter 12
Rsnail was on the run from Mickey. It had been 2 days since he escaped from Clegane. He had made it as far as the Dojo, where his secret Ninjas were.
"WHERE IS RSNAIL!!!" Mickey shouted in anger. He wanted to have him and his island before their evil plot began.
Rsnail was already beginning his search for the Tomb of the Jin where lies the Queen of the Undead's grave. Rsnail had also arranged for the Grand Most Wise of the Court to meet him at the Dojo, where he would bring important books to study and a very rare item that would help them with their quest.
"Here it is" said Grand Most Wise Roman.
"Excellent! This will help for sure. Now we just got to figure out how this thing helps." Rsnail replied.
Roman had handed him an old crown with two jewels on either side and in the middle, a beautiful crystal. It had once been a Princesse's crown, because it was smaller than any other kind. It must have been meant for a child, one that may have never existed.
"The Crown with Two Jewels, and here is the research." Roman said as he opened a large boring book.
"Agh! We need to read all of this?" Rsnail complained
Roman coughed mucus as he laughed.
"No no no nay! On page 38281 there is information about this specimen.", Roman laughed "Here. It reads:
Quote:
Upon the tiara lies two jewels, one in the center is a crystal of no power yet has a marking on it. It is the marking of the DJINN. The first rune is a D and the second is an I and an N. It is found a long the way of the Temple. Through the secret passages of The Old Ways. There lies first a chamber of four passages. The third is thought to be the one which leads to the second and then another to the third. But the way beyond the first way is a test of riddles and illusion. The power of the crown of the fell Arabian Queen of the Undead can control all who come in with a weak understanding."
"What does it all mean then? The Old Way has been lost for countless years. Even I do not know where to go?" Rsnail said
Roman nodded, "Indeed, The Old Way has been lost. But don't forget we have this crown now. Perhaps the Ski Mountain will have clues?"
"It might... Alright then. We'll hike to the Ski Hill and with our Ninja skills nobody will spot us." Rsnail replied
"Yes yes but be careful though. Do not under estimate the abilities of Lord Mickey." Roman warned
Chapter 13
Rsnail and 5 Ninjas were hiking through the desert snow mountains. They were all carrying heavy gear and lots of warm clothes in the coldest part of Club Penguin. By the second week of hiking they had reached the end of the cold mountains.
From the edge of an icy cliff they could see all of Club Penguin. A white haze of different things stretching hundreds of kilometers. In the distance they could see the tallest mountain on the island, The Ski Hill. That is where they were heading for the next day.
Rsnail lit a fire and everyone slept close together during their final super cold night.
Whilst they were sleeping Rsnail was troubled by strange dreams. He woke up suddenly, and he could hear the slight sound of snow crushing under someones feet. In fact, there were many but far away. He thought it was just the wind. Two hours later he woke again, but this time he saw something. He got up and looked.
He saw a carriage not too far away journeying towards them at some speed. Banners flocked in the moonlight and soldiers voices were calling. They could see him. Rsnail quickly woke the others and grabbed the Crown and Two Jewels. He hid it in a snow hole and readied his sword.
They all gathered together in a circle.
"Look! Some peasant hikers trying to escape from Mickey's ships! Get them!" a soldier shouted
Twelve soldiers dismounted the carriage and drew their swords. They charged towards them.
The ninjas double flipped and rolled under the soldiers sword and counter struck two of them in the stomach.
"Aghhh!" they cried as they fell down dead.
Rsnail engaged two of them, blocking their swipes. A ninja saw rsnail was in trouble and charged, stabbing one of the soldiers. Rsnail dodged the other sword swing and back kicked a soldier. There were nine left, too many.
"Give it up you bunch of worms!" one said
The Ninjas gritted their teeth and Rsnail grabbed both hinges of his sword.
"No? Alright then! Kill them!" the soldier said
The ninjas charged together with Rsnail and cut down two more soldiers, but they all came for Rsnail at once. The ninjas tried to help but they had an archer firing from the cart. An arrow hit rsnail in the shoulder and he fell, smashing his head against a rock and became unconscious.
Chapter 14
Rsnail woke. His head was pounding with pain. He slowly lifted his head to look around. He noticed it was daytime and he was traveling through a camp of soldiers all rushing to get prepared to move out. He was near the shore because he saw ship sails in the distance. He thought to himself that he must have been unconscious for days.
He knew that Mickey was forcing everyone out to make it easier to rip apart the island to search for the Jin Temple. He wondered where his Ninjas were. Then, he noticed that they were in another carriage behind his.
He tried to move his arms but his hands were bounded together.
About half an hour later they had moved to a quieter area and their carriage stopped moving. Then a penguin got out
"Alright, we'll get these carriages on board as soon as the next ship arrives." he said.
Rsnail started to loose hope. His Ninjas must be bound up too and the Crown and Two Jewels was now miles away at the outpost where he was injured. He closed his eyes and breathed deeply in sorrow. He imagined Mickey sitting on his Helmet Throne with an army of undead ghosts killing all the innocent citizens.
Suddenly, there was a cry of pain followed by a sword swing. Rsnail looked up behind him to see. There was a Knight dressed in silver armor battling with two Disney Soldiers. Rsnail didn't know who it was, but it was a very good warrior. Within 10 seconds he had slain both of his opponents.
The Knight then jumped up onto rsnails carriage.
"My King! You are safe now" said the Knight
"Sir Galmond! You have risked much saving me." Rsnail replied great fully
"It is my honor, but we must be quick. The next ship is not too far away and all of them are full of Mickey's men. Come quickly, I shall free the Ninjas."
"Thank you!"
To be continued....
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10th August 2015, 04:11 PM
This stories just get better and better they'r so amazing and the suspense the humor the mystery the switches I mean who would imagine Mickey is from the bad guys who??? I love this series so much I enjoy them and they always make my day and this series r in my top 5 fave books now If I stay is my 6th fave book bcuz I enjoy this way better 1+ I'm not cray cray to not say 1+ I love it and I want part 6 and part 7 so much almost as much as I want school to start amazing story I love it.
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10th August 2015, 04:37 PM
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10th August 2015, 05:06 PM
ChocoCupcake wrote on 10th August 2015 04:36 PM:
That picture of Mickey though
IKR
And I really really really love this series. It brings great information on basically the history of Oldcp, and brings more information about the detectives case. +1 +1!
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23rd August 2015, 02:29 AM
this series is amazing so addicting.