17th November 2013
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The Honeybee

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17th November 2013, 03:25 PM

This is a poem that I wrote, for it is a bullying poem. It shows of a flower, and a not so tall tale. That in real life, can help all that failed. What I mean by this is you should not be afraid. For am here for you, and others are too.

I am a flower, with petals and all, but the honeybee is making me brawl.
He’s sucking my pollen, and then I had fallen.
For it was he sucking the pollen out of me.

I cried out of pain, then I cried out with joy.
For he had gone away, and had taken his “alloy”
I gleamed in the sun, I looked at the dew.
And I saw his yellow face, saying I’m coming back for you.

I yelled out in fright just another sound of the wind.
But no one could hear me, or the trouble I was in.
He flew by the rock, and over the hour.
He’d soon sucked all the pollen out of my flower.

I realized that day, the day I say,
Made me stronger in every way.
I knew I was bullied by that one honeybee.
But I was courageous, can’t you see?
That Honeybee was not going to get in my way,
For today was the day, I stay not obey.

I would stand up to him, and say that it’s wrong.
To bully another is like singing a bad song.
It comes out of your mouth, and others will hear.
And you will be cringing the next day in fear.
But do not be afraid, for I stood up to him.
And I said it’s ok, do not be a dim.
For I am your friend, I will be here for you.

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17th November 2013, 03:29 PM

Awesome story Maniac!! Well I meant poem actually. Very creative very magnificent very expressive! Did she be a official poem for my sake. I love it very detailed in many ways. With a happy ending as I can see which is very obvious!! I loved the last poem one. Which is very awesome where did you come up with it?!?! I want to see more from our a moderator which is very creative and magnificent!! I love it if you post another poem I'll be willing to read it!! ;)


~Furry On!
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17th November 2013, 03:32 PM

Nice poem Maniac, i enjoyed that. Thanks for making my day happier! :D Bye now.



-Jaycee
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17th November 2013, 03:33 PM

This is a spectacular poem maniac! I'm good at English, but not as good as this! It's great, it's all about a flower losing it's pollen, but perfectly links in with bulling. Not only does it have a rhythm to it, but it can show people what to do if your being bullied your self!

Come up with more! -Archie
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17th November 2013, 03:37 PM

Who thinks I should come up with a new series called Poems That Care? It would be about life's problems, and once a week there would be a few funny short one's that would also make your day.

"But just remember, that you are all pickles,and you are all One-of-a-kind."

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17th November 2013, 03:39 PM

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Does anyone think I should come up with a new series called Poems That Care? It would be about life's problems, and once a week there would be a few funny short one's that would also make your day.

If I were you, yes! This one poem has been great, why not extend your talent? -Archie
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17th November 2013, 03:41 PM

this poem that u made is perfect for ppl who are getting bullied out there
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17th November 2013, 03:43 PM

I'm touched best poem ever and yes you should start a poem career your spectacular!
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