Hello,
I've seen many of your stories and some of them have some little things not in them .
So today, I will show you how to make a great story.
Here are some things!

1. Use your five senses, taste, see, smell, feel, and hear .
2. Use adjectives, example: blue, cool, fun.
3. If your making a chapter story, make different events happen in each chapter. Don't say the same thing!
4. Make it a bit funny, sad, and very talented at the same time! The readers will like your stories better and read them everytime.
5. Make stories with settings, where will they be at! Example: The little children went to the barn to feed the animals.
6. Make some characters! Make a main character also!
Name the characters! This will show some funny talking because you would use "'s when they talk or say something.
7. Make moral stories! It will teach people some lessons!
8. Don't use the same first word. Example: It was fun. It was cool. It was..

I hope these things helped!
Like and comment if you like this tutorial.
Thanks for reading!
Bye!
-Jonathanititi

Nice post! It will totally help young writers. +1

Great post! One thing is, a start a series, and then stop it...

Omg you sound like my teacher. But it is true, I see you like Language. Nice post though ! +1

Great Job!
I know why you did this,
because your a great young story writer and you want everyone to be like you.
Keep it up!
-Nathan

This is great! I bet it will help alot of people. +1