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Posted in Sonic and Mario World • 9th June 2015, 11:23 PM

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The plot and script and well thought out, but some of the characters dialogue is overused.

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Posted in Fnaf Story! #4 • 9th June 2015, 11:21 PM

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Very nice, the grammar is alright and the script is thought out very well. Characters are, for the most part, believable.

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Posted in Mechanoid #3 • 9th June 2015, 11:19 PM

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The dialogue is well thought out, so is the script. Grammar is very nice along with a creative setting. Although it is a somewhat overused title.

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Posted in Too Cute Pokemon #1 • 9th June 2015, 11:17 PM

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The grammar is on the poor side and more space for dialogue is needed. However, this is very creative with a somewhat thought out script.

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