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Posted in Tough Love Part 6 • 4th October 2015, 05:11 PM

are u doing another part?
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Posted in Tough Love Part 5 • 1st October 2015, 07:29 PM

LOVE It plz hurry for the other part i wanna see what happens i wonder who screamed?
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Posted in My "best friend" part 3 • 1st October 2015, 07:25 PM

Natalia walks in and says "babe are u alright" "yes im fine where were you"andrew says."I was super busy"she says.I knew she was up to something.My phone starts ringing. "excuse me" i say "sure" andrew says."whatever" she says.I totally forgot that i had natalia on snapchat.I click on her story and see that all this time that i was with andrew she was at parties and she was on vacation and ditching school.I was so surprised.I ran to the room, but it was to late they were already back together they were kissing.I say "oops gtg" and run home crying.I am on my bed writing in my diary.My mom knocks on the door. "can i come in" she says"sure" I say. She comes in with a giant bear and a basket of flowers. I am shocked i dont know who send them to me. " so who is it" my mom asks. "umm its my privacy" i say laughing. "alright" she says i get the card quickly and says "thanks for being with me all these days" it says. "who could it be" i think in my mind.Next day..... Im at the cafeteria im eating a burger they gave at lunch. Andrew comes up to me and says "thnx" and winks i smile. I walk to my classroom and get ready for math and social studies.Someone slams my locker. I look next to me, its natalia. "what do you want" i say " I want you to stop flirting with my boyfriend" she says angrily. " i am not". "stop it" some one says. I look up its andrew . " Im done with you!" andrew says. Natalia runs crying. "I like you" andrew whispers in my ear. Hope you guys like it working on part 4 probably ill do it tomorrow:)
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Posted in Tough Love Part 4 • 28th September 2015, 07:32 PM

PLZ start part 5 already
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Posted in Tough Love Part 3 • 27th September 2015, 04:24 PM

I love ur stories plz make more and i love harry potter ( and tom riddle)XD
PLZ MAKE MORE!!!!!!!
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Posted in My "best friend" part 2 • 27th September 2015, 04:23 PM

While walking home from school i see Andrew walking on the other side of the street. I try to not look up and open my book bag i check my phone and have 13 messages, ten are from Natalia and 3 are from Andrew? "Andrew? " i say. i quickly check them.one of them says" hey wats up, is the rumor going on true? " i quickly look up surprised.He is crossing the street.i try not to look up. all of a sudden i hear a crash. "BOOM !!" i quickly look up. Its andrew he got in a car crash! I get my phone and call the ambulance. Im at the hospital with andrew i wonder "where is natalia? ". i fall asleep. "relatives of Andrew" a nurse says. I wake up and say "me!", the nuse says " he has a severe injury in the head ", i burst out crying. I walk to the chair i stay there for 2 days. Next day, i go to the cafeteria and buy a salad. I quickly text natalia "where are you andrew is in the hospital" nurse calls "relatives of Andrew" i get up from the blue chair "yes? " i say. the nurse says " We are so so sorry but Andrew is in coma" i burst out crying. Everyday i go and talk to him and read him stories but he never wakes up. On friday i go and say "good morning Andrew" he doesnt respond.
I sit beside him and hold his hand.I can even imagine him laughing and talking. I feel his finger move. i pres the emergency button doctors burst in. Andrew opens his eyes. the doctor checks andrew and says "he is all better ". I quickly pop a smile on my face. But natalia comes in. hope u guys like it working on part 3:)
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Posted in My "best friend" part 1 • 27th September 2015, 04:04 PM

Sure, i will make part 2
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Posted in My "best friend" part 1 • 26th September 2015, 02:33 PM

LOL my friends name is brianna too
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Posted in My "best friend" part 1 • 25th September 2015, 09:19 PM

sorry i accidentally did tooXD
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Posted in My "best friend" part 1 • 25th September 2015, 09:18 PM

I was waiting for the bell to ring.All of a sudden the bell rings.the teacher yells out "class done see you monday". my friend comes up to me and says"guess what Andrew is coming" i quickly look up and hes there walking towards me."whats up " he says "nothing much" I reply back. My best friend Natalia knew i liked him.Next day "guess wat today we can skip social studies"she says "great" I say i was walking to the cafeteria. Natalia, Amanda, and Brianna were there too(some friends).
Andrew was on his way to my table. I sighed"ahhhh". andrew says "u ready" i look to the left he is talking to natalia.she says "yes". he grabs her bye the hand and they walk off. I try not to burst out crying but everything is see is them too holding hands and natalia looking back whispering "sorry, im so sorry". I run to he bathroom and tears start to come out from my eyes. i thought to myself she knew i liked him how can she do this to me.Next day, i see them kissing on the street, i try not to look but i cant hold it i look back they are still kissing. During recess i figure out natalia traded me and my name was rumoring through the hall ways that i liked andrew. I go up to natalia and say wats going on.she says "nothing looser" did she just call me a looser i say. I run.I hear them all calling me "LOOSER, LOOSER".
hope you guys like it still writing part 2
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