Holding the hand of your loved one is always the best.
Better than holding anyone else's out of the rest.
You may loved them with all your heart, it might have been mighty, or slightly weak.
But you wouldn't care, all you knew is that you loved him or her, loved them everyday of the week.
Hey great grandma, I may have never met you, but I went across the world to see,
I came to come and meet YOU. I didn't know your name, it could've been Lori or Lee.
When my mother and I finally arrived, I sadly found out you have died.
You may have been old or a bigot.. We could've been friends.. oh, the horses we could ride.
Hey that boy my age across the street,
we could've still be friends and make up words like reet.
When I found out you have died..
It made me sad, I could've of lied..
Lied that I didn't love you, dear ol' friend..
We could've walked to the moon or the end..
Hey little girl,
remember our ride on the whirl?
You probably don't since your were little,
but I hoped you remembered all those riddles.
But now you've gone far away, possibly dead?
Maybe you remember the books we've read?
Hey that boy I love... Remember me?
I certainly remember you. I remember we.
Hey! All those people I've lost?
Remember how high that candy bar cost?
Hey uncle. I know I haven't met you ever.. But I know you mean a lot to my dad.
You and my dad used to pull random levers. I guess you were kinda rad.
You and my dad were the best of pals...
Until you were murdered... We'll miss you ol' pal.
Hey aunt. I went to your funeral when I was little, sorry for running around... and knocking stuff down...
The uncle's son, my cousin Marc.. He was 12, he chased me around.
Now that I realized how much I miss you, I'm sorry for never considering for you.

Even though, you've all have died, I'll remember you all, keep you all in my heart.
Thank you for everything you've done for me.

Hey guys. Remember when you loose a loved one, you'll see them again, but for know, keep them in your brain. Keep them locked safely in your heart.

Hey, don't be sad. When people do wrong, they'll be forgiven
Like how everyone's saying, "Everyone makes mistakes."
Which is true! Don't kill yourself over a silly game!
If they are your friends, they'll soon learn to forgive you.
If it was an accident they'll understand.
That's what friends are for!
(If they don't forgive you, then we'll still be your friends! Especially me! )

Kirsten wrote on 11th March 2016 12:42 AM:

Your poems are amazing I would love to see more poems from you!

Awwh! Thanks! You will see more! :33333

Otaku wrote on 10th March 2016 05:14 PM:

Everyone fears rejection, but sometimes rejection makes us stronger if a friend rejects you from who yo really are then they were never friends. Awesome poem keep it upXD

Thank you so much for your wisdom! I'm glad you liked my poem!

MsAdventure wrote on 10th March 2016 02:51 PM:

I agree, I was always afraid of being rejected...untill I realized I shouldn't fear it (I realized now that I read this awesome poem!)

Don't fear of rejection. If you do get rejected, remember... You learn from your mistakes. Thank you for reading my poem!

Lloyd wrote on 8th March 2016 07:38 PM:

Woah nice poem! Keep up with the good work!

Thanks! It comes from the heart!

Italy wrote on 8th March 2016 07:20 PM:

nice poem. the fear of rejection is called Kakorrhaphiophobia.

Aah! Thanks for that info! I needed that! :DD

Elexxory wrote on 8th March 2016 05:53 PM:

Your poem is terrific! You need to keep it up!

Thank you! I appreciate that you love my poems!

Palace, you've made me terribly upset.

This poem is about feelings, not the game.

Palace wrote on 8th March 2016 05:36 PM:

CueTheRain said on 8th March 2016 05:34 PM:
Have you ever loved someone to bits?
Sometimes it'll make you confused, and not a wit. (wit means clever)
Maybe you're too scared. Too scared of rejection? People putting you down?
Don't you wish she'll or he'll just love you and they'll give you a crown!?
I loved someone. But he's a pain to my heart. He gave me a heartburn, he broke my heart.
Ladies and gentlemen, do you feel the same? Grab a new crush and put it in the cart.
Silly me, silly you. I'm so funny, so are you. We fall in love and get broken.
Instead of getting broken, why not be caught? By someone.. new?
Rejection hurts, I've been there too. Go meet up with all your friends.. or just a few.
They'll help you, find someone new.
But don't stand still and watch him or her move on.. Stop him from her, let him get to you.
Come to Professor Silly Goose, I'll help you!
Get up from your chair,
Do your hair!
It all starts with a simple hello,
Get out to the town, you guys should grab some jello.
Or ice cream.


yes because this is what oldCP is all about

I'm sorry, but that's not the point. I know my poem has nothing, LEGIT nothing to do with feelings of the players of Old CP and how the players feel, since that's what you say.
I only made this because sometimes I have feelings to express and I like to help others with their feelings.
I'm sorry that you hated my work.
I'm sorry you don't like wisdom.
I'm sorry you don't like helping others.
I'm sorry for being sorry.

Kat Fairytail wrote on 8th March 2016 05:38 PM:

^^^ No it is not, Oldcp is about penguins thats why its called Old Club Penguin, Means to chill with your peeps! Nice poem btw it sounded like it

Thank you

Have you ever loved someone to bits?
Sometimes it'll make you confused, and not a wit. (wit means clever)
Maybe you're too scared. Too scared of rejection? People putting you down?
Don't you wish she'll or he'll just love you and they'll give you a crown!?
I loved someone. But he's a pain to my heart. He gave me a heartburn, he broke my heart.
Ladies and gentlemen, do you feel the same? Grab a new crush and put it in the cart.
Silly me, silly you. I'm so funny, so are you. We fall in love and get broken.
Instead of getting broken, why not be caught? By someone.. new?
Rejection hurts, I've been there too. Go meet up with all your friends.. or just a few.
They'll help you, find someone new.
But don't stand still and watch him or her move on.. Stop him from her, let him get to you.
Come to Professor Silly Goose, I'll help you!
Get up from your chair,
Do your hair!
It all starts with a simple hello,
Get out to the town, you guys should grab some jello.
Or ice cream.

Buddy25 wrote on 6th March 2016 11:00 AM:

Yeah hope to see theese posts

Mystic Kacket wrote on 6th March 2016 10:05 AM:

Amazing! It is lovely!
Please do more

~Becky

I will!