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Dear Damen, Chelsey, Mikomi and the Moderators, Where's me? JK



I, Dancebear, am applying for : (that doesn't go, this is an application) Knight

Previous Experience with the Empire : (My Previous, not Previous:)



- I was a very trusted Royal Healer (You are, you weren't "was", you are"
- I applied for (Royal Jester, Royal Counsellor) in the past (not available anymore) (what does this have to go with Experience with the Emperor)

What makes me worthy of getting knight (is, not

- When I was a Royal Healer, I had to take care of one of the most powerful people in OldCp (The Hound). The Hound was very risky and very dangerous. I didn't let him stop me. I wasn't scared one bit of that person. When he had the power to kill.

(This would be better as a full sentence)

- I have a good trust towards a lot of people. When I was healer and I had to heal The Hound, I was given by Damen the power to execute people. I was told by Damen to only use it if something happens. I didn't even use it once.


- My main goal on OldCp is making sure everyone is happy and safe. A Knight must protect the royals and everyone else. I know I can gain trust from this job also. I would risk my life on OldCp to protect and fight for our safety!


Why I want to be a knight : (I want to be a knight because, then you put that bottom part up here)


I would like to be a knight because I want to show everyone that I can protect them and I would risk my life for them. I care so much about everyone that I would take a bullet for them any day. Being in the Empire was great. I honestly didn't care about getting the money. All I wanted was to make happy faces when I was a healer. I want to do the same thing if I become a knight. I can gain trust once again with my commitment and hard work.



Will you protect the members of the Empire and every citizen of OldCp? : (Will I, nobody is asking you something)


Well of course I will! That's what I have to do! If someone attacks, I will always be there to fight.

How would you use your powers :

(I will use my powers for)


I would only use my powers in training sessions with Damen, when someone attacks OldCp and When Damen tells us to use the sword.

Who would be the number one priority to protect :


Definitely the Royal Family. But I will definitely protect everyone including (Moderators, Penguin Watches, Everyone!) I'm not letting someone left behind. Honestly, the royal family is important but everyone must be protected. So in the end, I'm saying everyone is important to protect.

In conclusion, I would like to say thank you to everyone that supports me. I could've never applied for this if I didn't care for everyone. I'm here because I care! I literally live half of my life on here! And I'm proud of it. Thank you!

Dancebear

Well, that was okay, just a lot of mistakes. Well, good luck!


-Jon

That is so rude. She worked hard on this. How would you like it if someone said to you if you made an application?

Dear Damen, Chelsey, Mikomi and the Moderators, Where's me? JK



I, Dancebear, am applying for : (that doesn't go, this is an application) Knight



Previous Experience with the Empire : (My Previous, not Previous:)



- I was a very trusted Royal Healer (You are, you weren't "was", you are"

- I applied for (Royal Jester, Royal Counsellor) in the past (not available anymore) (what does this have to go with Experience with the Emperor)





What makes me worthy of getting knight (is, not



- When I was a Royal Healer, I had to take care of one of the most powerful people in OldCp (The Hound). The Hound was very risky and very dangerous. I didn't let him stop me. I wasn't scared one bit of that person. When he had the power to kill.

(This would be better as a full sentence)

- I have a good trust towards a lot of people. When I was healer and I had to heal The Hound, I was given by Damen the power to execute people. I was told by Damen to only use it if something happens. I didn't even use it once.



- My main goal on OldCp is making sure everyone is happy and safe. A Knight must protect the royals and everyone else. I know I can gain trust from this job also. I would risk my life on OldCp to protect and fight for our safety!



Why I want to be a knight : (I want to be a knight because, then you put that bottom part up here)



I would like to be a knight because I want to show everyone that I can protect them and I would risk my life for them. I care so much about everyone that I would take a bullet for them any day. Being in the Empire was great. I honestly didn't care about getting the money. All I wanted was to make happy faces when I was a healer. I want to do the same thing if I become a knight. I can gain trust once again with my commitment and hard work.



Will you protect the members of the Empire and every citizen of OldCp? : (Will I, nobody is asking you something)



Well of course I will! That's what I have to do! If someone attacks, I will always be there to fight.



How would you use your powers :
(I will use my powers for)


I would only use my powers in training sessions with Damen, when someone attacks OldCp and When Damen tells us to use the sword.



Who would be the number one priority to protect :



Definitely the Royal Family. But I will definitely protect everyone including (Moderators, Penguin Watches, Everyone!) I'm not letting someone left behind. Honestly, the royal family is important but everyone must be protected. So in the end, I'm saying everyone is important to protect.



In conclusion, I would like to say thank you to everyone that supports me. I could've never applied for this if I didn't care for everyone. I'm here because I care! I literally live half of my life on here! And I'm proud of it. Thank you!



Dancebear