Hello! I'd like to apply for Detective.

Name: Crowflying

Age
My age is 14.

Experience: I'm currently a banker, Detective Apprentice ,and looking for an extra job. I have been a Healer on OldCP. I love watching many, many Crime fighting shows including: NCIS, NCIS LA, NCIS NO, CSI Miami, and much more. They are awesome. I know all the ways to knock out the liars and stop criminals in their tracks. It's my job to protect Snaildom. Nothing will get in my way. I will follow orders from my Emperor Damen and Inspector Hashir. I will respect the rest of the dets I'm good at discovering new things. I can help people too. I very trustworthy and active from 7:30 am to 10:30 pm. I have good grammar too! I will never abuse my powers! You can count on me to get the job done.

Why I want this job? Well, this job will let me protect users by solving cases. I mean when I watch the Crime fighting shows, it makes me want to do the same thing. It will give me an opportunity to help people. I can help people with their problems. I really don't want to get a power or anything I just want to protect my home. Because this place is like my home.

About me
I'm an unusual kid. I like basketball and hanging out with my friends. I not quite a talker in real life. I'm serious and sensitive as you can see. Video games and TV is what I like to do. Also, I love playing outside with my family. I have some cats. One can be kind of a handle. They other can bite. I love hanging out with my friends like Tennis, Hashir, Nintendo, Bob, Bakon, CocaCola10, and Damen. Thanks for reading!

~Crowflying

It kinda sounds like you want power/rank more than helping Oldcp

~Adawg-Detective of Oldcp

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It kinda sounds like you want power/rank more than helping Oldcp



~Adawg-Detective of Oldcp

No I don't. I want to protect OldCP.

After some training you might be good for the job.

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After some training you might be good for the job.

Thanks Tennis. Could you train me?

Nicely done, however I would suggest adding a little more detail into it, including if you are active, trustworthy, if you would abuse your powers, and other matters of the job. However, for the most part, this was a rather interesting application.

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Good application, but put a little more detail into it. Such as if you are - active, trustworthy, if you would abuse your powers, etc... But, for the most part, you did alright! +1

~Liv

I will add that to it.

Good Application Crow!

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Good Application Crow!

Thank you! I really do appreciate it!

Great application! I hope you get that rank!

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Great application! I hope you get that rank!

Thanks Rebecca!

Awesome app I am also making one my own I hope people would read it

Well, This is what i thought of it:
GREATER THAN GREATEST, BETTER THAT BEST, AWESOMER THAN AWESOME (lol)
Thanks for PMing this to me!!!!!!!!!!

Please, lock this discussion, it's an old topic, and you should have focus in only a rank, you get wise one, very good, so, wait some time.

Lloyd

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Please, lock this discussion, it's an old topic, and you should have focus in only a rank, you get wise one, very good, so, wait some time.

Lloyd

I want to see what people say. -_-