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Don't leave me now..Part2
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10th August 2015, 10:56 AM
Hey guys!! So here it is, part 2, I have part 3 and 4 done already but I'm gonna keep them for a while. It's gonna be a long story so I probably wont be able to post all of it, hope you like the parts I post anyways! Enjoy 
Kitti looked back at the lady, desperately trying to hide her star, and shook her head quickly in response and turned back.
Anne was about to turn around too out of curiosity, but Kitti grabbed her ear which made Anne change her mind fairly rapidly. They continued hurrying down the back street, not paying attention to whom was looking, or to whom was following. All they wanted was to find somewhere to hide, and fast.
After a few minutes of watching the girls run, the lady finally turned around and returned to the village square.
The girls approached the crumbling church. Anne glared at the graveyard which stood before the steeple. She couldm't see the grass for all the graves, and they weren't all ancient. One was dated a few days ago. She looked at her sister, she wondered how Kitti could be so calm after all they had been through in the space of 3 days.
Kitti was very tired, Anne could tell, the black and purple rings around her eyes said it all. Anne couldn't help it, she let a few soft wails out of her. Kitti hopelessly tried to comfort her without making a fuss herself, but she couldn't stop herself.
Kitti looked back at the lady, desperately trying to hide her star, and shook her head quickly in response and turned back.
Anne was about to turn around too out of curiosity, but Kitti grabbed her ear which made Anne change her mind fairly rapidly. They continued hurrying down the back street, not paying attention to whom was looking, or to whom was following. All they wanted was to find somewhere to hide, and fast.
After a few minutes of watching the girls run, the lady finally turned around and returned to the village square.
The girls approached the crumbling church. Anne glared at the graveyard which stood before the steeple. She couldm't see the grass for all the graves, and they weren't all ancient. One was dated a few days ago. She looked at her sister, she wondered how Kitti could be so calm after all they had been through in the space of 3 days.
Kitti was very tired, Anne could tell, the black and purple rings around her eyes said it all. Anne couldn't help it, she let a few soft wails out of her. Kitti hopelessly tried to comfort her without making a fuss herself, but she couldn't stop herself.
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9th August 2015, 02:11 PM
Hey guys! I type a lot of stories irl so I wanted to share one of them with you! Theese are the first few pages of one of them, it's called Don't leave me, hope you guys like it. Keep the comments clean, thanks!
Chapter 1: “Quick, in here!”
Anne scurried down the back street, trying to be as calm as Kitti was. She was being dragged by the sleeve of her tattered pinafore, which was hanging on by a thread. Kitti tried her best to not be seen, but one lady heard Anne's sqeauling and protesting and decided to have a nose around.
“Now look what you did! Imbosele!” hissed Kitti as she pinched her ear and dragged her harder than ever. The lady came whistling round the corner of a shop and spotted them.
“Girls, may I help you?” she said in a quirky voice as if she owned the town. The two girls still had the stars on their forehead from when the Nazis nearly brought them to the camp.
On the day their parents died, the Nazis had stromed their tiny little cottage and had captured all six Jews. Anne,Kitti,their mother, father and their two grandparents.
Their parents desperately tried to free their children, biting the Nazis, screaming and kicking. It resulted in a lot of abuse for the parents, but some how or other, the Nazi who had a tight clutch of the children roared in pain as their dad had bit him. The children slipped from his clutch and Kitti legged it with Anne in her arms.
As all Nazis were, they were cruel, and in annoyance they gave the parents and grandparents a good beating. It resulted in death.
Unaware of any of the destress, Kitti and Anne ran for their lives. After 3 long days of running, they reached a small town in Hungrary. They had no idea the name of it as that didn't matter, all that mattered was finding a place that they could hide in, for the rest of the war.
Lucky enough, Kitti spotted an old steeple not far from the gates of the village. It looked very run down, and it was locked away, but there had to be some way in,right?
Sorry if you think it's too deep, if that is the case I will remove it
Chapter 1: “Quick, in here!”
Anne scurried down the back street, trying to be as calm as Kitti was. She was being dragged by the sleeve of her tattered pinafore, which was hanging on by a thread. Kitti tried her best to not be seen, but one lady heard Anne's sqeauling and protesting and decided to have a nose around.
“Now look what you did! Imbosele!” hissed Kitti as she pinched her ear and dragged her harder than ever. The lady came whistling round the corner of a shop and spotted them.
“Girls, may I help you?” she said in a quirky voice as if she owned the town. The two girls still had the stars on their forehead from when the Nazis nearly brought them to the camp.
On the day their parents died, the Nazis had stromed their tiny little cottage and had captured all six Jews. Anne,Kitti,their mother, father and their two grandparents.
Their parents desperately tried to free their children, biting the Nazis, screaming and kicking. It resulted in a lot of abuse for the parents, but some how or other, the Nazi who had a tight clutch of the children roared in pain as their dad had bit him. The children slipped from his clutch and Kitti legged it with Anne in her arms.
As all Nazis were, they were cruel, and in annoyance they gave the parents and grandparents a good beating. It resulted in death.
Unaware of any of the destress, Kitti and Anne ran for their lives. After 3 long days of running, they reached a small town in Hungrary. They had no idea the name of it as that didn't matter, all that mattered was finding a place that they could hide in, for the rest of the war.
Lucky enough, Kitti spotted an old steeple not far from the gates of the village. It looked very run down, and it was locked away, but there had to be some way in,right?
Sorry if you think it's too deep, if that is the case I will remove it
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Bullying quotes
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9th August 2015, 01:27 PM
Hey guys, Picked this up on the internet, think its from tumblr. Please no mean comments ty.
Your skin isn't paper, don't cut it.
Your face isn't a mask, don't hide it.
Your size isn't a book, don't judge it.
Your life isn't a flim, don't end it.
Sorry, most people will probably think oh no don't talk about self harm but I just wanted to show this to people, cause some people do this to themselves, and I wanna put a stop to it. #antibullying
Your skin isn't paper, don't cut it.
Your face isn't a mask, don't hide it.
Your size isn't a book, don't judge it.
Your life isn't a flim, don't end it.
Sorry, most people will probably think oh no don't talk about self harm but I just wanted to show this to people, cause some people do this to themselves, and I wanna put a stop to it. #antibullying
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FOR GOD SAKE!!
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9th August 2015, 12:39 PM
IM FLIPIN RAGING. I WAS JUST COMING UP TO MY 140TH OUTFIT, AND IK MOST PEOPLE WOULD SAY OH THATS NOT A BIG DEAL BUT FOR ME IT WAS ANYWAYS. DAMEN OUR SO CALLED EMPEROR WIPED ALL OF THEM. EVERY ONE!! GONE, KAPEESH KABOOM KABANG KABONG. IF HE DONT UNRESET OR IF THINGS LIKE THIS CONTINUE, ILL SIMPLY QUIT. I UNDERSTAND THERE MIGHT BE SOME TECHNICAL DIFFUCULTIES BUT AT LEAST GIVE SOME SORT OF A SOOTHING MESSAGE OR A WARNING GOD!! -Feeling so mad with Rae and like 50 others 
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Dis is emabarassing. #embarassinglifegoals. 
